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[towinjustonce]

Oggy convinced me to write today, so her is a 5min free write. It may be trash I may clean it up one day, but I just feel good that I wrote something heh.

My Shower

Porcelain bowl of antique beauty,

You cup my form and hold my spirits.

Liquid fire,

transparent droplets

bursting from above to beat down on my shoulders.

The weight of the

Comments

[augmar]

i love it steve. i can't wait till i'm in motown. we can bust out some serious poetry

[towinjustonce]

awsome heh. It will bea good summer..maybe u can teach me some poetry..i have no form or taste for it really. I'd like to be better at it though.

[stopthatgirl]

As an English major (and this gives me the highest authority), I give it an A+

[towinjustonce]

awsome :)