“There’s someone for me somewhere, and I still miss someone”

May 04, 2005 02:33


To the Girl I’ll never get to met,

Hello gorgeous, I was just writing to say hey, ask how things are treating you and to let you know I’ll never be able to love you. Sorry.  Not that you care, I don’t think we’ve ever met.

I sit hear sipping my Earl Grey, it’s by no means a sweet tea in fact it’s bitter if it’s anything. I don’t like to ( Read more... )

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augmar May 4 2005, 06:47:15 UTC
Very cool. You've got some great lines in there. I really like the compliment: You're light. It's so precise. I've got some of my own ideas for it too. I could tell em to you later or in person. I think it could make a really great prose poem. Thin it out a bit -- keep the meat, and drop a lot of the article word clutter.

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towinjustonce May 4 2005, 14:13:44 UTC
Sounds good. When are ou coming again?

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augmar May 4 2005, 16:30:47 UTC
i'll have that figured out in a couple days. Close to when summer session starts.

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