Week Three Excerpt

[toxic_apiaceae]

This one is a longerish one, folks.  It's from chapter seven and is definitely VERY rough.  I'm reading it now and having to hold myself back from editing it.

Anyway, basic premise is that Clara, our murdered prostitute, was accidentally brought back as a zombie rather than a ghoul.  Philip, our apprentice necromancer, doesn't know the significance

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[anonymous]

ユニクロで100％merino woolのリブタートルセーターが
1枚1,290yen.
あまりにも安すぎるので疑ってたけど、off whiteを買ってみて
良かったので、昨日、グレーへザーと黒も買いました。。。。
20代のときから10年くらい前までずっと3万円くらいするのを買っていた。
たしかに、使えるものをよく選べば、ユニクロはかなり使える。

[anonymous]

全身ユニクロだとチープなので、高いものに
ユニクロをあわせるとかね。
ヒートテックのunder shirtはほんとうに優れもの。
おたからや用にセーターが安く買えたのはうれしい。

[toxic_apiaceae]

Ahhh... random Japanese person has struck again.

私は性交あなた自身興味を起こさせられなかったり、行かない

Thank you, babelfish.

[toxic_apiaceae]

Basically, it's a sales pitch for clothing. So's the other one they kindly dropped here as well.

And I'm pretty sure I said I'm not interested and to fuck off. *nods*

[belluminabyssus]

I'm becoming EXTREMELY hooked by this; it's clever, innovative, and even though it's obviously a rough draft, the writing has been stellar. I can't wait to read more!

Out of curiosity, did you start calling Phillip "Mr. Stein"? I didn't remember his last name, but I assume it's Phillip!

[toxic_apiaceae]

Oh, my my my... Is that the very delicious Jonathan Rhys-Meyers I spy in your icon? *licks*

Sorry. Automatic reflex.

Yes, Philip's last name is Stein. Arthur is very formal about addressing people, so whenever something's written from his POV (for now at least) it'll include formal addresses. So, Philip = Mr. Stein and Clara = Miss Robinson.

[belluminabyssus]

Tis indeed! He is VERY delicious.

Aha, that makes perfect sense! :) Just making sure I wasn't making things up or something.

[toxic_apiaceae]

Guh. I love him SO hard core. Ryan Reynolds as sexiest man? Nay, friends. Nay.

Do you watch The Tudors at all? *shivers* Such a good, good show.