Excerpt Chapter Eight

Nov 23, 2010 12:25

It's a little early to be posting this, but I seriously just wrote it and love it to pieces.  I hadn't intended for Philip and Clara to get along like they are, but it is SO NICE.  I am really, really loving their dynamic at the moment.

And Clara?  I can't believe we had such a rough start.  It's so hard to believe that this is the character I've ( Read more... )

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eldrfire November 24 2010, 14:03:38 UTC
Ah ha ha, love it!

You are so working with all of this crazy zombie stuff, like coming up with that great naughty little line for her to have whispered to Dr. Carfax... ah haha! Way to make it all work with you!

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toxic_apiaceae November 24 2010, 21:43:57 UTC
AHAHAHA!

I'm glad you think so. I decided while reading that this is better as chapter nine. Chapter eight will now be about her first physical exam and her eating someone else. *nods*

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belluminabyssus November 24 2010, 22:17:18 UTC
Ooh, yay! More to read! I was a little sad to not see Carfax in this excerpt, but I really am enjoying Clara's and Philip's interactions. You put me to shame with how much you've written.

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toxic_apiaceae November 24 2010, 22:38:25 UTC
Haha! Aww, I'm sorry. But it's good to know Arthur's already got a fan.

And don't say that! I'm really loving everything you've written so far. Yours and Thora's so far are books I already KNOW I'll be purchasing when they come out.

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belluminabyssus November 24 2010, 22:50:38 UTC
pfff assuming mine ever gets done. XD But I appreciate the sentiment all the same.

AND YES. I love Arthur. He's like a more bearable/likeable/awesome version of Walter from Fringe. And yes. I know a lot of people would crucify me if they heard me say I don't like Walter much.

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