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[toxic_mystery]

I'm sorry I've been neglecting you all! I'm so busy lately and I haven't really had much time to write anything but the songs i'm supposed to be recording soon.
So I'm going to post one of them in the hopes of honest feedback and to show that I am still alive and haven't forgotten anyone!

It's not that great but it's a start and it sounds better

Comments

[luvz_2_act]

i love it! especially the line "no urge to jump, just a will to fall"

[toxic_mystery]

thanks it just came into my head one day and i wrote like 3 songs trying to fit it in to one ;)
I ♥ your icon it's beautiful

[luvz_2_act]

thanks :) she's Astrid from the movie White Oleander (one of the best movies in the whole world!!)

This is DeathNdestruct

[dressedindeath]

its not going to be a pop-rock, I hate that shit (other then glam/hair rock...its not my fault. It's me mum for getting addicted to it)

It's has some cliches rhymes, but its good and probably be quick to remember and sing with. you should make this your first single (if yuo want popularity). I don't see anything wrong with it. but its just words, if you add music and sing it, it can totally blow (the words don't match the music, vocals not reaching its peak and etc.) When you get this recorded, you should put a copy here.

You are in a band? I didn't know that!! What's the band called?! and what label are you in?

[toxic_mystery]

YAY another glam/hair rock addict *dances around like an idiot*
I wrote the music before the lyrics (i can't stand when i have good lyrics and no decent melody).My sound is kinda like a lacunacoil/placebo/HIM/evanessence(the early stuff) hybrid thing but it works for me.
I'm not with a label. It's a solo independant demo album that my agency offered to back, which I still need to name grr. I was thinking 'Dark Delusions' or 'Disillusioned' or something along those lines but I don't know they all seem kind of cliche.

[dressedindeath]

YAY, YOU ARE ONE TOO. *dances with you with a beer one hand and a Don't Fear the Reaper shirt on*

I love Placebo. I'm addicted to them, I love there song Sleeping With Ghost. Love Lacunacoil too. HIM and Evanescene is alright, but not something I listen to everyday or even once a week. (unless, it Call Me When your Sober Video and that besides THE GUY IN THERE IS SO FUCKING HOT) *cough*

Yea, I don't like the names either. There not good. You should do something unique like Nirvana (not the type of music, but the name. Did you even heard of that word before the band? Probably not (even though I was 3 during the Grunge area)

[toxic_mystery]

HOLY CRAP thats my fave placebo song!! I love my sweet prince and days before you came too. I love alot of the lyrics HIM write, especially the song love's requiem.
I think you're right about the name, I'm going to go and sit around and read my theasorus, or however you spell it, and see what I come up with. All Suggestions Are Welcome And Encouraged!
xox
Ryn