EMERGENCY

[toxic_toe77]

ok i kno i seem obsessed and everything, because i JUST updated...but this is a total and complete EMERGENCY!! (omg i just sounded like such the prep i am...lol) ok so here's the deal, a good friend of mine wrote this amazing "rap" i guess you could say but it's really good and he doesn't think i'm being serious, i want to kno what you guys think.

Comments

[craving_you_]

u still haven't added me! :(

[anonymous]

Tell your friend the rap is awesome!

----Anthony

yea...weird

[anonymous]

haha...u know my raps r much better....
traffic, traffic
looking for my chapstick
feeling kinda carsick...
theres a ford mavrick!
(malibus most wanted)
um...cool?
sorta depressin....but it sets up well...then it has a great development period and touches lightly on teh happiness at the end yet staying bittersweet...mabye i shoudl b an englihs teacher?

gary

[anonymous]

it was tight but at the end he started to sound kind of dumb...is this the kid taht got in troble for jacking a car like in the rap

Uh...

[anonymous]

Lemme put it this way, i couldn't do any better...but it was mediocre...if there was a tight beat behind it, it might be something you could bob your head to...but i had to read it to myself...but don't listen to me, at least you can put rhymes together...