Concrit & Contact Info

[toxicspiderman]

Constructive criticism, whether on characterization or on general roleplaying is always welcome. Anonymous commenting is on, IP logging is off.

My contact information:

AIM: valentinitesarah or antimonysarah
Email: valentinite at livejournal dot com
Personal LJs: valentinite (fandom/gaming), antimony (mundane life

Comments

[lady_angelina]

Ex-player of von Karma here.

I don't know a thing about your character or his canon, BUT! S.T. is HELLA fun to read! :D His prose is so brilliant; don't be surprised if he gets quoted soon. :D I'm considering doing that with the one where he said something about the Institute's general assholery and lack of beer.

Keep up the great work! <333

(P.S. No worries on his internal monologue. :D IC != OOC, and I used to RP a truly bastardly OC who was horrendously bigoted, so I understand. ^^;; Loved getting him beat up, though, hehe.)

[toxicspiderman]

Thanks -- you were an awesome vK, fyi. PW is one of the few big canons at Damned I'm actually familiar with, so I was stalking y'all. :) I hope you bring someone else in.

I'm really glad to hear the humor is working for people; I've never written that sort of thing before.

[lady_angelina]

Ahhh... totally meant to reply to this yesterday, but work kinda interfered. =/

Awwww, thank you. *Blushes* I kept feeling like I flailed with him so much, and then time constraints certainly didn't help -- you probably know the latter one all too well. Don't know if I'll ever have time to actually play again, but I fully intend to continue stalking. ;)

And like you, PW was also just about the only canon on damned that I knew much of anything about. Well, that's still more or less true, but I'm learning more of them as I go (Full Metal Alchemist, Death Note, and One Piece, to name three that intrigue me now). The same will be true of you; this is a great way to get exposure to new fandoms. :D

This type of humor works very well for me, indeed. :D

[toxicspiderman]

I hear ya on the time constraints. Printing out the last two comments and writing tags longhand on the bus to work (so I could quickly type them in when I got there) is possibly the silliest thing ever, but it worked. I have no idea how the people with lots of characters manage.

Chat got me reading Death Note, and I have Persona 3 sitting around. Since I started RPing, my to-play stack of games has idled.

[toxicspiderman]

Heh, I was going to ask since I saw what happened during NS. I'm still up for it if you want, though I won't be offended if you want to postpone so Peter can clingtalk to people he already knows ICly.

If you still want to do it, how about lunch shift?