what the F?

[toxictango]

Around the room the wind blew
From nowhere a swirl
Like someone I once knew
A beautiful sexy girl
The one I use to do
The wind disappeared
And so did she
The worst I had feared
Never again will her I see
She's gone forever
Out of my life
A relationship severed
In my back she stuck a knife
No longer the love of my life

Comments

[sullentheory]

I dare not comment on the others one, actually I would on the one above this one but I am too lazy. Besides, I like this one more... I don't know why but it just has quality in it that I find beautiful, I find that in most all your writing though. This one also seems like you are opening up more. Okay well enough compliments I don't want my little elf to get an ego.