video one ✖

[toyingwith]

[The Dreamberry flickers on and whoever is watching can see that a figure it stooped beside another that's lying on a bed. A lazy curl of smoke wafts up from the ash tray on the bedside table and the figure that's stooping lets out an annoyed little cough. In amidst the scribbling, there's also a rhyme being said in a sing songy tone.]

Goosey goosey

Comments

[soulsymmetrical]

...The left hair-tie should be 5 centimeters more to the left, and the middle one 2 centimeters more to the right.

Also, the line for what I'm assuming to be a beard should have been drawn 6 centimeters more toward the left before going down.

-And that left swirl! The starting tip is too far down compared to the right! It should be rotated 2 degrees to the left!

[by the way, he's critiquing based on Tyki's orientation, not when facing him.]

[toyingwith]

[Killjoy.]

And you are?

NOW WITH LESS FAIL.

[soulsymmetrical]

[still saying it could have been perfectly symmetrical!]

Death the Kid.

I ENJOYED THE FAIL THOUGH

[toyingwith]

[ . . . ]

[Well her day just got a lot more interesting.]

Your name is seriously 'Death'?

/still crying forever.

[soulsymmetrical]

[...he really is going to get this all the time, isn't he? but he looks nonplussed about it and just answers like normal.]

Yes. I was named after my father, but I go by "Kid" for short.

/holds

[toyingwith]

That's really too bad for you, isn't it. [It's not so much a question - it's really a statement.]

...I think I'm going to call you Kiddy instead.

[soulsymmetrical]

...K...Kiddy?

[toyingwith]

Do you not like it?

[soulsymmetrical]

No, and I request that you not call me that in the future. [if ever.]

[toyingwith]

And if I don't stop calling you that, what will you do then?

[soulsymmetrical]

............I'd rather not think about it.

[toyingwith]

Tell me, Kiddy.

[soulsymmetrical]

I said not to call me that!!

[toyingwith]

If you aren't going to tell me what you're going to do then why would I stop calling you that?

[soulsymmetrical]

[alkjdla problem was he really couldn't do much since...well it's just a person calling him a name he would rather not be called by and he didn't even know who she was (though a quick glance at the caller ID would work).]

I will continue to correct you and not address you further until you cease calling me by that name.

[toyingwith]

Really? That's all you're going to do? That's rather boring.