I'm not really experienced with critiquing dnb, but I like it a good bit better than the last one you showed me.
The snare beat seems to vary so much that it makes the song overall feel choppy...maybe make it a bit more constant? Although I do like the parts where it cuts out; that's a cool effect. Also, the things that sound like a phone dialing are a cool idea, but their rhythm doesn't quite fit with the rest of the music. The laser effects work well and give it kind of a rising/falling effect, which is very cool. Probably the best part.
fucking liked it ted, the middle portion made me laugh like hell, but overall im impressed
the beat was good, but its just so many compressed notes it made it feel.....i guess u could say awkward. Can't exactly put my finger on why so many notes is bad but if u kept the same beat and cut the amount of notes in it inhalf itd sound loads better 2me, but the middle section with the "phone dialing" is good but it sounded weird on its own with just the beat, add a soft melody behind it and thatd be money, cuz the phone dialing is cool
good job man, if u ever need some help id would be more then happy to listen and give u suggestions
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The snare beat seems to vary so much that it makes the song overall feel choppy...maybe make it a bit more constant? Although I do like the parts where it cuts out; that's a cool effect. Also, the things that sound like a phone dialing are a cool idea, but their rhythm doesn't quite fit with the rest of the music. The laser effects work well and give it kind of a rising/falling effect, which is very cool. Probably the best part.
Good work, keep at it.
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the beat was good, but its just so many compressed notes it made it feel.....i guess u could say awkward. Can't exactly put my finger on why so many notes is bad but if u kept the same beat and cut the amount of notes in it inhalf itd sound loads better 2me, but the middle section with the "phone dialing" is good but it sounded weird on its own with just the beat, add a soft melody behind it and thatd be money, cuz the phone dialing is cool
good job man, if u ever need some help id would be more then happy to listen and give u suggestions
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