A Celestial Legacy- Chapter 1.2

[traciandrus]

 

Comments

[madhatterette]

Wow, that queen's one bitch huh? XD

[traciandrus]

Damn straight. LOL No one wants to get on her bad side. Which is probably the only side she has.

[brightblacksims]

Love this story!
Can't wait for the next. :)
Oh and Todd is definitely a cutie. Every single person in my legacy has become lazy. I just try to take pictures of them when they're not slouching lol

[traciandrus]

Damn the lazy gene. Hopefully we will breed it out. Thanks for reading! :)

[bubbs72]

Run from Brendon..he has a SMUSHED nose!! RUN! RUN RUN!!

Todd sure cleans up nicely. They do make a nice couple, wonder if it will work out?

Hmmm, the queen B sure is upset the ship isn't back yet. I wonder why??

[traciandrus]

Its coming. We have much plotty-ness coming about the ship.
Nuff said.
Thanks for reading.
And who's Brendon? lol Oh you mean my Shea?

[petalbrook]

Todd is hot. TwoJeffs over at Simbology has a fix for the lazy animation.

I wonder what the Queen has up her cranky sleeve.

[traciandrus]

Todd is hot. I will have to take shirtless pictures to show you. :)
Thanks for the info, I might have to go get that fix. I hate the slouch.
Thanks for commenting!

[julessims]

I finally got to a chance to read this without interruptions. Curse those interruptions!

Anyway, lovely chapter. I really enjoyed Celeste's time in the park meeting people. It was very humorous.

Celeste and Todd are adorable. Their date was very sweet.

Hmmm... The Queen seems awfully interested in the whereabouts of the ship. I'm looking forward to seeing what that is all about.

I thought your dialogue was good. To me, it read very naturally. Celeste and Todd's conversation in the restaurant, especially, was great. Same with her conversation with Shawn (which made me laugh a little too loudly, by the way! Loved that!).

[traciandrus]

Thanks for commenting! I appreciate your feedback, I'm still struggling with dialogue. I'm trying to read lots to get some ideas. :)