This chapter was so sad and traumatic. I hope that Eric doesn't blame himself...it was an accident. Karl is so sweet, I love that they are in love...and I hope that Karl takes the big bucks and that they move to America.
Little sister your writing is beautiful, the story flowed very well, and the plot is excellent...I am truly enjoying your story...your writing style really rocks!!! *hugs* :)~
*hugs back* Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed the way it worked. I wasn't sure how to end this chapter for a lot of reasons but I guess this means it turned out well? :) Thanks again for taking the time to leave a comment.
I'm actually not sure because to be honest I had this story mapped in a whole different direction then it was going. The first time I make out a story map and I write it completely different. :)
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Poor Eric, won't he learn to stay to safer sports
Safer sports? pshaw its the danger that turns him on :D
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Little sister your writing is beautiful, the story flowed very well, and the plot is excellent...I am truly enjoying your story...your writing style really rocks!!! *hugs* :)~
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You're welcome of course!
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