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[nightanddaze]

This was supposed to be finished about two weeks ago, but I was too busy talking about Trainspotting at school to finish :<. This is based off a prompt given to me by sour_kitty (as are most of my trainfic).

Title: Mind Wipe
Rating: R
Pairing: Sick Boy/Renton, Spud
Summary: Spud, Sick Boy and Renton go out
Notes: Many apple-loggies for the lateness (

Comments

[duckgirlie]

I really like it! Nice to see an alternative perspective on the coupling, and to see Sick Boy's reserve being slightly cracked, if only for a moment.

[nightanddaze]

Thank you!

[the_mogget]

Oooh slashy business from outside perspectives, very nice. Torchwood icon also very nice, but that has nothing to do with the task at hand.

The task at hand being flailing on you for being better than me and actually finishing a Trainspotting fic. In other words; 'doing a better job at being a member of the fandom, the whole twenty of us out there.'

Sweet!Renton gives me feelings. Sweet!Renton + horny/upset!Sick Boy gives me far more inappropriate feelings.

[nightanddaze]

Thank you vurra much!

I try not to be forward, but, FINISH A FIC OMG. Cohesive fandom, I wantz youuu.

Innapropriate feelings are made of hearts (and hard-ons)!

[richterx]

the outside perspective was a really good idea. i liked the hints of how rents+sickboy act differently around each other when they are alone.

[nightanddaze]

Thank you

[littleclodia]

omg, why the hell this fandom is so small(( it seems to me i've read all rents/sick boy fics in two days...

thank you sooo much, you made my day... night... whatever)))

i think i'll join your community, if you don't mind, and do some art... or i'll try))

and please-please-please, write more, you are so good at it))

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[weegiegirl]

i liked the introduction of Spud's perspective to this little tryst as Spud is one of my favourite characters. Wasn't sure about some of the dialugue between characters, like Sick Boy asking Spud if he'd had 'any liquor'. 'Any drink' would sound more appropriate as working class Scottish dialect. Liked the idea of Begbie being the one Simon fears finding out the most. It shows that even though Simon is a bit of a bastard, he'll never be top bastard in the Trainsotting bastard hierarchy. Apologies for my over-zealous use of the word bastard. I like to swear.