I really love that you got intothis scene a bit more, since I've always thought there was more to it than was in the book. My favorite line would have to be, "There are no words, mostly because Renton is awkward as fuck and cannot think of anything to say." because it's just such a perfect representation of that relationship.
Just a very minor note, the first paragraph of the second section is a different point of view from the rest of that section.
I have complete sympathy... Despite my best intentions, I never end up posting anything until I've been awake twelve hours or longer, which can lead to some very interesting uses for the english language.
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Just a very minor note, the first paragraph of the second section is a different point of view from the rest of that section.
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