I love love love how the first bits of the poem flow. it has a really nice rhythm to it. That sort of died at the end, but it works out anyways. it reads easily and doesn't have an ubercheesey rhyme scheme. Good job! :3
Thats a wicked-awesome poem! Harry Potter = Deathly Hallows = life. I don't even know you, but you a cool/kyute person:B I`m not as big with the HP boys together as i am the HP girls, but this one is truly a memory-locker
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Good job! :3
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I don't even know you, but you a cool/kyute person:B I`m not as big with the HP boys together as i am the HP girls, but this one is truly a memory-locker
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