Open your eyes, I'll keep mine closed.

May 20, 2012 17:18

Title: Open your eyes, I'll keep mine closed (curriculum).
Author: transgenicveins
Pairing: Liam Payne / Zayn Malik
Rating: Uh N-17 I suppose?
Warnings: Real person slash, slight slight slight teacher!kink undertones, blatant use of AAR lyrics. 
Summary: 'Liam isn't quite certain what it is which makes him agree to this crazy, masochistic plan of Zayn's ( Read more... )

one direction, liam/zayn, fanfic, otp: it was a joke i swear, otp: you're hurting him harry

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snuffleslove May 20 2012, 19:52:56 UTC
oh jesus fuck this was perfect.

(coherent comment to come i swear but rn i have no words.)

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transgenicveins May 29 2012, 09:58:37 UTC
you're so lovely holy fuck, you don't even understand, it means a ton coming from you (considering i think you're just about flawless liam/zayn writer). thank you!

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snuffleslove May 30 2012, 01:21:38 UTC
your comment made me blush furiously and i promised you a more coherent response so here it is. (i basically ended up requoting your entire fic, sorry not sorry) x

Liam likes watching Zayn. He likes unravelling Zayn, knowing him better than anyone else, the enigma of Zayn Malik being more a revelation. He likes knowing that Zayn licks his lips when he’s nervous and has this sleepy, crooked smile, all for Liam, and does a gentle role of his hips in time to particularly fantastic music.

this is the perfect image of liam in love tbh

Liam squirms and smothers his blush in the crook of Louis’ neck. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” he mumbles, watching Zayn’s throat clenches as he swallows and wondering how it would feel around his cock- stop. “I’m not hard.”

something about liam burying his face in louis' neck and thinking dirty thoughts about zayn is just. jesus, babe.

the fact that simon knows. fucking hilarious.

It’s after a show, in his changing room, and his head is light with Toto-I-have-a-feeling-we’re-not-in- ( ... )

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transgenicveins July 9 2012, 08:21:51 UTC
yeah okay just reread this comment and just about fainted with praise ah you are such a sweetheart i hope you're having a lovely summer (presuming you're one of those northern equator people) and you are so lovely and i do not deserve such lovely words so ah thank you (like a month late, but ohwell)!

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badjujuboo May 21 2012, 03:59:15 UTC
omg this was so SO perfect! Liam is this amazing entity of FEELING and emotion and his masochistic need to get close to zayn no matter if it hurts in the long run is just... ITS SO WONDERFUL AND THE END!
THE END!!
and simon and EVERYONE knowing BWAHAHA
the strawberries!
JFC I AM JUST FEELINGS! SO MANY FEELINGS!
and he tastes so good, so musky and like lavender body wash and Liam can’t help but wonder if he’s the first person to discover this, the Neil Armstrong of Zayn Malik. you are also the best at witty one linery pieces of epicness
/meanderingcommentmeanders

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transgenicveins May 29 2012, 10:00:41 UTC
you
are
so
lovely
ugh
everyone knowing and supporting it is basically my head-canon i mean i don't like to think of the management or the others as prejudiced people and this is a ramble but thank you so so much c:

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mrsyt31 May 21 2012, 16:37:41 UTC
<3<3<3 LOVE THIS

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transgenicveins May 29 2012, 09:59:21 UTC
thank you! <3

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shoreparty May 22 2012, 03:21:57 UTC
You are fantastic and Ziam is life and we should be friends :D

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transgenicveins May 29 2012, 10:02:57 UTC
You're the sweetest thing and we should definitely be friends because whenever i see your username it reminds me of saving private ryan and that movie is flawless, okay,
.. anyways, thank you!

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kotabear24 May 22 2012, 05:32:52 UTC
Once again, absolutely fantastic. I loved the way you wrote this, I actually can not stop reading it lol. It's like the fourth time I've read this, omg.

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transgenicveins May 29 2012, 10:04:53 UTC
you're a sweetheart and ah it's such a compliment because you're such a fantastic writer. thank you!

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