Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I just want to crawl inside it and live there. Your diction is beautiful and poetic and I am in love with reading your stories.
I've told you before about how much I love your writing, but this- this was just brilliant and wonderful and more than I can actually say.
I really loved Liam the swimmer, and how he taught Zayn to swim, and the style that you wrote this in. The matching tattoos and the jealousy-but-not were perfect and I really enjoyed how it all came together.
There's just so much about this that I adored and yeah. Um. Yeah.
(also, I actually started flailing when you quoted Brother. I love that song)
oh yes, let me tell you something, i couldn't stop smiling when they were flirting in the first part but i was in the library and then somebody stopped and asked me what the matter was because my head kept hitting the desk in 'this-is-so-sweet-kill-me-now' moments. c:
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I really loved Liam the swimmer, and how he taught Zayn to swim, and the style that you wrote this in. The matching tattoos and the jealousy-but-not were perfect and I really enjoyed how it all came together.
There's just so much about this that I adored and yeah. Um. Yeah.
(also, I actually started flailing when you quoted Brother. I love that song)
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(also, christ that was hot the IMAGES good godd)
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