Comments | transient_words: [fic] A Lesson in Humiliation

transient_words

[fic] A Lesson in Humiliation

Sep 19, 2012 19:57

Rating: NC-17

Summary: The worst is that he knows this isn't the end, but just the beginning, and all John can do is just pray and hope this is over quickly before he falls apart completely. Non-con.

Notes: A collab between me and scribblestorm. All feedback appreciated.

Warning(s): Starts off in 'medias res', and features non-con/rape. Also has some rather ( Read more... )

warning/trigger: non-con, nc-17, fic, sherlock

Comments 10

butteronmybread September 19 2012, 20:14:22 UTC

whoa, I feel sorry for John :(
But you had really good ideas!
(loved it)

transient_words September 20 2012, 09:29:04 UTC

I do too, which is telling since I wrote this!

And thank you for reading and commenting!

ragnarok_08 September 19 2012, 21:06:59 UTC

Whoa....

This was really intense.

I loved reading it :)

transient_words September 20 2012, 09:30:01 UTC

It was a very intense thing to RP/cowrite, yes.

Thanks for commenting :)!

anonymous September 21 2012, 22:03:53 UTC

Oo... I was expecting an end with sherlock coming to rescue and some sort of comfort... But that way. We don't have to witness sherlock coming to rescue at the exact moment John would be... just coming. >< ( i also expected somethig like that but thanks god you aren't THAT heartless hi hi). Thks for the fic, it was very in character ;)

transient_words September 25 2012, 15:48:18 UTC

Hmm, I think Sherlock coming to the rescue would have been very *cruel*, and ...I think the ending works nicely like this as well? It's open-ended, and leaves room for interpretation - that's the intent XD (whether it works or not is up to the reader).

Anyhow thanks for commenting <3

exbex September 22 2012, 02:38:26 UTC

Deliciously wrong and wrongly delicious, as only Moriarty/John can be. I'm pretty ashamed myself for loving this; a true hallmark of a great story (of this type, anyway).

transient_words September 25 2012, 15:49:52 UTC

Thank you!

I think it speaks volumes for my 'sanity' that I'd not be ashamed for loving this type of story? XD

There is something deliciously wrong about Moriarty/John, and I'm glad this story captured some of that.

fleshisyummy September 22 2012, 03:30:12 UTC

Ack! I meant to comment on this earlier, but I am so blargh and forgetful. But...wow. Just...wow. I literally jumped in my seat when Moriarty pulled the trigger when the gun was up John's ass. Moriarty's voice was really perfect in this - cruelly insouciant most of the time but also capable of a dark edge.

And John. Poor John. :(

...there's that nagging feeling inside of him that he's always just been a fun tag-along for Sherlock: a cute army doctor who serves as nothing but a replacement for a skull.

This line was really great, but it was really sad. And the end...John pretending Moriarty was Sherlock...that was so beautifully depressing. You and scribblestorm did a really nice job on this. I'll also check out your Sherlock recs from your other post! I haven't really been reading much Sherlock fic since I got hooked on Supernatural, and I really need to! :)

transient_words September 25 2012, 15:54:30 UTC

It's fine. I'm very late in replying, so it's all fine XD. I mean, really -- it's fine <333.

Yes, Moriarty is ...*something*, and I'm ...well not glad, but honoured/pleased (?) that this earned a reaction out of you? I personally find him very difficult to write, and I was really surprised at how well scribblestorm pulled him off here. So all credit goes to her.

John was painful to write here, and I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I had a lot of ...well okay, I did have fun writing John in that kind of situation. Though I couldn't tell you why if you asked me (I'd have to think about it ...).

Anyhow, thanks <3 (and sorry for this rambling).