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transubsituated

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Jan 30, 2006 01:17

( maybe it was falling )

Comments 6

pirategail January 30 2006, 08:12:08 UTC

Did you write that?
Because.. "It's beautiful. It's beautiful. It's beautiful, it's true."

transubsituated January 30 2006, 08:43:17 UTC

I did.

Because... "I saw its face, in a crowded place, and I don't know what to do." haha

frozensilver17 January 30 2006, 18:35:01 UTC

I like it. I like it a lot. It speaks to my spirit.

I love how it speeds up at the end, and then jumps off a cliff.

Brava, dear one. Brava.

transubsituated January 31 2006, 03:20:17 UTC

thank you. oh miss jay.

materialising January 30 2006, 20:17:50 UTC

The double narrative/dialogic aspect here is really effective; I like it a lot.

transubsituated January 31 2006, 03:22:07 UTC

i was trying to do a role reversal thing but keep it "believable"/not too precisely on the mark. as in, one voice starts in the physical, the other in the non, but both leading to a conclusion, but whose. thanks.