I love the wordplay, the philosophical underpinnings. ("maybe becoming is more in/the doing the using the used./being more/than this, at least. curious" is fucking great.) if you edit yr poetry, don't know if you do, or take suggestions, I would suggest fleshing out with some images the stanza w/"jurisprudence, poetential, tenor, beauty"--but that's just me, and it might fuck up the formal tightness.
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