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Jul 29, 2009 13:35

How's my roleplaying? Leave a message after the beep. Anon is enabled, plz don't use it to be a complete ass.

!concrit, !ooc

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redgineer November 4 2009, 23:53:25 UTC
Just saying, Naoto totally deserves an award for being so patient with RED and his homo fears. ;D

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trapbound November 5 2009, 00:01:43 UTC
|D Naoto may not like the Scouts very much, but he can totally understand being confused about stuff like this so he's inclined to be more sympathetic lmfao. THANK YOU SO MUCH lkdfjladskjfkdlsjlfjadflj

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collaring November 18 2009, 04:43:05 UTC
Again I am TERRRIBLY sorry for revealing it--I'm exhausted and derp, Atia was a bitch.

Are you really sure it's okay? Just pm me at um.. goodwith-wood or something.

Linds

or aim me at:

bettiebloodshed

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footmittens March 24 2010, 21:04:20 UTC
I can appreciate that you're having fun with your RP, but I think you're losing your sense of balance between characterization and quality of play and getting swept up with the breakneck and irreverent pace that Scout keeps. Naoto is sounding less and less like Naoto and more like another Scout lately, and it's happening much too quickly to simply attribute to in game development.

I apologize for giving this to you under anon, but I really am a coward and hopefully you can forgive that. I don't want you to be wanked on for this, and I think it's coming your way unless you find a way for Naoto to be Naoto again.

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trapbound March 25 2010, 00:58:17 UTC
aldksjaflkjdlkdasj wow that was not supposed to be screened I THINK I FINALLY GOT MY SETTINGS RIGHT SIGH

Anyway. Thank you very much for bringing it to my attention. I was discussing something along these lines with a friend last night, actually; Naoto needs to be a bit more serious, I've been playing up his sense of humor too much. I'm glad to hear in a little more detail what I've been getting off about him. Hoooopefully I will be doing a canon review and possibly update soon, so I'm hoping to fix voice issues then if I haven't done it already.

Again, thank you so much! I'm glad you came forward to crit me, anon or not.

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anonymous March 25 2010, 02:54:02 UTC
You come off as extremely passive-aggressive at times. You are very pushy, not only in asking repeatedly for tags but for inclusion in plots that are already planned out and for CR in general. You are a very nice person but you need to tone things down.

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trapbound March 25 2010, 03:06:06 UTC
I like to let people know I've tagged because I knowwww how LJ can be about losing notifs, and because I'm used to going really fast with RP partners and it's a habit I've developed from that. I'll try and tone it down in the future.

As for plots - I enjoy participating in ones that interest me, certainly, but I don't want to be pushy. If someone doesn't want to include me they can tell me, and that's fine. But nothing ventured, nothing gained - if people are willing to play with me, they'd never know if I didn't ask, right?

And re the complaint about CR - I've received complaints that I don't CR enough with this kid. Sorry if you don't like it, but if people think I need to be getting out more then I'm going to make a good faith effort.

I can't really answer your complaint about being passive-aggressive, as I'm generally blunt and I will say what I mean to people's faces, but I'll try and be on the lookout for that. /shrug

Appreciate the input!

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anonymous March 25 2010, 21:37:51 UTC
Anon is enabled, but is IP logging off?

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trapbound March 25 2010, 22:10:07 UTC
Yep!

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