Fic: What it Leaves Behind

[travelinthedark]

Title: What it Leaves Behind
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: FRT
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: The day they broke up was a week short of what would have been their two year anniversary. Spencer didn’t feel remotely sorry when Aaron said, “I hope this won’t affect our working relationship,” and he responded with, “Fuck you.” // A

Comments

[martina66]

thank God you did not split them up, that would have so hurt..........

[travelinthedark]

i couldn't bear to do so...

[mondays_eyes]

MAN.

EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS GOLDEN.

That was incredible. Everything you write is so believable.

Spencer was still slightly bleary eyed from being woken up an hour early and guerilla attacked with information he wasn’t ready to process without at least a cup of coffee. “Are you breaking up with me?” He asked, and his voice was still raspy with sleep and laced with confusion. That paragraph was like HOT DAMN, pretty. Your sentences are magic, bb.

Amazing job. Mem'd like a boss.

[travelinthedark]

i kind of am in love with you. a lot. :)

and i can't wait to read more of your writing, because you have a cadence with prose which i envy.

also, i have noticed you are a fan of white collar, and i need a basic intro to the show so i can start watching a few seasons late... if you would help i could possibly provide you with porn. or hula dances....

:)

[mondays_eyes]

THIS COMING FROM ONE OF MY FAVORITE LJ AUTHORS OF ALL TIME.

You have like, an everything about your writing that I envy!! Haha, thank you so much, that really means a lot. <3

I CAN DO THIS!!! YES!!

I am a fan of porn and hula dances.

[travelinthedark]

listen, you, i do not say this lightly: when you write angst there are parts where you hit a stride and things flow in a beautiful way without forgetting the awkwardness of real relationships.

damn it.

[bowie28]

So glad to see you're posting again. This was wonderful, probably one of my favorite stories from you. Thanks for a great start to my day. Looking forward to whatever you have in store for us. :)

[travelinthedark]

glad you liked it, my dear :)

[travelinthedark]

p.s. your icon is fucking *hot.*

[bowie28]

็Hee, can't take my eyes off of it myself.

[nebula99]

I liked this a lot - really nicely done and I loved Spencer's "Fuck you."

[travelinthedark]

thank you :)

[pharmawriter]

Loved this. Completely authentic, resonates. Bookmarked for rereading. *send virtual coffee - whoops, cookies* Sorry, first thing in the morning for me *G*

[travelinthedark]

haha, for me coffee is better than cookies! thanks!