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5 Mandatory Events at the FBI Regional Training Seminar

Feb 04, 2011 19:34

Title: 5 Mandatory Events at the FBI Regional Training Seminar
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Gen, Hotch/Reid
Disclaimer: So totally not mine.
Summary: “Hey guys!” Jeff’s voice is just as upbeat as it was when he was telling the entire conference room about the wonders of community stewardship and his volunteer work as a ‘Big Brother.’ It’s also ( Read more... )

fic, six profilers & garcia (criminal minds)

Comments 49

ginny214 February 7 2011, 00:33:22 UTC

This is hilarious, and so spot-on. You absolutely nail all the characters. In canon, they all do dry humor so well, and I wish we saw more of it. You got it just right here, with every single line. My absolute favorite bits:

“Wouldn’t you telling us what to write defeat the purpose of what you just referred to as, and I quote, ‘dreaming your own big dreams?’” Reid asks.

“I think the final evaluation of our team may end up reflecting upon us poorly,” Prentiss says, “because it’s bound to mention the part where I murder Jeff-with-an-exclamation-point with a staple remover.”

Every. Single. Line. of Part 2

“I can’t believe it, but I actually miss Jeff,” Prentiss whispers back.

“That could be because it looks like it came as part of a halloween costume,” Morgan says.

Really, every line made me grin, and every third line made me laugh out loud. Your humor is just wonderful, and the team banter is priceless. So well done! Thank you for sharing it with us!

travelinthedark February 16 2011, 19:09:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I love writing ridiculous slash snarky dialogue but I'm not always sure about how it comes out as a finished piece, so I really appreciate your comment. Thanks for reading :)

junalele February 16 2011, 11:30:40 UTC

*grins widely* You had me with the exclamation mark and the underlining. God. Why do such coaches always have to be like human golden retrievers on crack? seriously.

Also - so much love for the Butch Cassidy references. Only, if Reid were to be transported to that time he'd definetely be that geeky guy in the train waggon refusing to open the door. Only that Reid would talk Butch down and not the other way around... God, that would be an awesome crossover...

Well, I'll shut up with the rambling and get back to work. Now with a big grin on my face. Thank you. :D

travelinthedark February 16 2011, 19:11:49 UTC

Oh. My. God. OldWest!Reid would be fucking awesome. Someone needs to write that like, immediately. Thank you for reading, I'm glad it made you smile :)

ousoonerfan February 26 2011, 23:55:26 UTC

Literally laughed out loud while reading this...Thought it was great.. :)

travelinthedark March 24 2011, 02:12:30 UTC

thank you :)

m_elle_22 July 2 2011, 22:55:06 UTC

omg, too funny. I especially love that it was Hotch who got in the last dig. LOL.

This fic was recc'd to me by generationxhero after I insisted she owed me a link to a funny story after her fic made me cry. She did well.

Holy awesome story Batman! amy494walker December 15 2011, 17:14:45 UTC

I'm pretty sure I've read this before and I can't remember if I commented then. But just in case I didn't, this was and still is the funniest thing I've come across in a hell of a long time. This especially ..

“Has Agent Rossi ever made any of you feel uncomfortable in the workplace?”

“I’m sorry,” Rossi interjects before anyone else can answer, “but have we met before? Have I done something to offend you?”

Had me laughing so hard I couldn't read for 5 mins. I love this fic, basically is the gist of what I'm saying :D