YES! Constructive criticism! Instead of the rest of the crap other assholes write...
Sorry, I just like seeing this when I go into the comments after reading these excellent pieces, rather then the "OMG YOU HAXOR HOW DID YOU GET MY LJ UNADD ME CAUSE IT LOOKS BAD TO HAVE YOU ON MY FRIEND OF LIST!"
Excellent cliffhanger. Is that bang her awakening? Or is it the gun she so happened to bring? Write more, when you consider appropriate.
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Sorry, I just like seeing this when I go into the comments after reading these excellent pieces, rather then the "OMG YOU HAXOR HOW DID YOU GET MY LJ UNADD ME CAUSE IT LOOKS BAD TO HAVE YOU ON MY FRIEND OF LIST!"
Excellent cliffhanger. Is that bang her awakening? Or is it the gun she so happened to bring? Write more, when you consider appropriate.
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