"Identity"

[travisb777]

here's a short poem that i'm workin on .. any ideas what do y'all think

Comments

[susieqkitkat]

Well...I'm commenting on your poem. I actually really like it...It is very dark and profound...My favorite is when you say "Identity is a mask we all must wear to shield us from hurt until someone is there." Seriously, it's like you're in my head with that line.

ylper

[travisb777]

thanks... i swear i'm not in anyone's head ~ sometimes i wonder if i exist in my own.. but don't we all feel that way at times?

Re: ylper

[susieqkitkat]

Yes. I believe we do, at some point. Tonight is one of those moments.