Stealing the Girl

Feb 20, 2011 23:10

Pairing: Puck/Rachel, Rachel/Santana, and Puck/Rachel/Santana
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Fem slash and smut
Word Count: 3, 050
Notes: This is my first time ever writing Fem slash and smut so I hope it's good. This was written for the puckrachel drabble meme for  Read more... )

fanfic: puck/rachel/santana, puck/rachel drabble meme

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totally_loca February 21 2011, 15:23:24 UTC
Oh yum. I loved this. The threesome is hot and all their interactions are awesome. I think the three of them together is my favourite OT3.

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treasure_chests February 21 2011, 18:21:58 UTC
Thank you so much! Pezpuckleberry is definitely my OT3 for sure! I'm so glad I got to write them.

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aries_heiress February 21 2011, 19:36:02 UTC
This reminds me of a time...oh, sorry - the really holy-hell-hot-as-fuck-sex did me in. Lol. Great story. Loved Rach&San's interactions and how Puck was determined to get what he wanted...because we all know that Puckerman always gets what he wants, but the fact that he was straight up with Santana about stealing Rachel? That was pretty badass. Loved the fact that you brought out a bit of Noah at the end. :) "But for me there is no getting over you." Swoon.

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treasure_chests February 21 2011, 22:25:20 UTC
Thanks so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was afraid Rachel or Santana would seem way too OOC.

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bringthefate February 22 2011, 01:23:04 UTC
This my friend, was amazing. The Smut. Puck being Puck, the Pezberry moments<3...Pucklepezberry is my OT3 so this just makes ame all kind of happy cause it's three of my favorite ships in one.

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treasure_chests February 22 2011, 11:32:10 UTC
Thanks, bb! They're my OT3 and I've been wanting to write them for so long and for some reason this prompt just made me think of them.

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meagan4dominic February 22 2011, 02:49:49 UTC
No, but you can put the image in your spank bank. - oh, SNAP! Love this, I can totally imagine Santana saying it, lol!

He never thought he’d see the day that Rachel Berry became a lesbian. - lol, an awesome way to conclude the first scene! It's a perfect intro for the rest of the story

he approaches Rachel as she’s putting her sheet music back in alphabetical order arranged by genre, artist, album, and song - LMFAO, it's so true!

Rachel hands him a condom. He doesn’t even know when she got it - they were prepared, love it!

I only just finished writing my own Puckleberry smut this morning so this was the perfect fic for me to read in the wake of that. Your first attempt at smut/fem-slash was so freakin' hot.
You kept to Puck and Santana's character perfectly
The ending was quite sweet :D

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treasure_chests February 22 2011, 11:39:47 UTC
Thank you! I love writing snarky comments from Santana's POV. I was really nervous about the smut scene that I edited it more than a couple of times so I'm glad it came out right in the end.

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smc_27 February 22 2011, 17:10:24 UTC
Um. Okay. Wow. You wrote my OT3 and ended with my OTP and there's really not much more I could ask for. Thank you for the awesome fill!

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treasure_chests February 23 2011, 02:30:29 UTC
Yay, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! For some reason your prompt just said hot pezpuckleberry threesome to me because I couldn't imagine Puck having the kind of friendship where he could say something like that and not get punched with anyone except Santana.

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