The Weekend

[treebute]

Thinking about it now, i don't think i used my weekend to it's potential. Friday i waited around for daivd hairston to get done with his damn pizza, casue his parents made him. We could of use my Half off two O'charley's dinners. I need to use it before the end of November i'll have to find another time. So after david came and pick me up, we went

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[supimscott]

I diagnose Doug with teh funney!

So after david came and pick me up,

[davidsparanoia]

Steven you screwed up
"So after david came and pick me up,"
should be
"So after david came and picked me up,"

steven another one

[davidsparanoia]

You need to make yourself clearer, this sentence doesn't make sense.
"we went to the bank and shit, found out i lost my card."
or
"we went to the bank and ,shit, I found out i lost my card."
or
"we went to the bank and did other things, I found out i lost my card."
or
"we went to the bank and Shit (as in the name of a person), found out that i had lost my card."

jesus

[davidsparanoia]

Steven, do you even read your own journals?
"that.I saw that Big Fat Greek Wedding that night."
Should be...
"that. I saw the movie My Big Fat Greek Wedding that night as well."
and to be completely accurate, it should have been...
"that. We saw the movie My Big Fat Greek Wedding that night as well."