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[treehugger11]

their eyes were watching god
but hers were somewhere else
while they waited for salvation,
she ran with the children, flooded with the river, cracked with the concrete, crumbled with the wall.
somewhere-
out of the valley and the shadow of death
she finds a secret she already knew-
between a rock and a hard place:
a woodgrain and a sunstone.
their vision

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[sparklyrevolt]

"she ran with the children, flooded with the river, flashed with the thunderstorms, cracked with the concrete and crumbled with the wall."
Beautiful.
I like it.