(Untitled)

Mar 24, 2011 23:32

Title: 5 Times Chris Was Too Shy to Tell Zach How He Felt and 1 Time He Let Someone Else Say It For Him.
Author's name: acacia_123
Written for: dante_s_hell
Pairing/characters: Chris/Zach
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Chris is a great actor, but when they aren't on set, he's very shy. He tries to get Zach's attention, but it's too subtle because of the shyness. Maybe he goes ( Read more... )

spring 2011, submissions

Leave a comment

Comments 12

dante_s_hell March 25 2011, 03:53:41 UTC
Oh, yes! Perfect! I loved this.

I felt so bad for Chris. His longing was so tangible and he kept flubbing it. And then you showed Zach's POV and the reveal of his feelings toward Chris were so right!

I also loved the little glimpses of their lives as they dovetail with events in real time.

Drunken!Chris was adorable, but kind of pitiful, too. I wished that Zach would have swooped in and picked him and carried him. But then again, Chris probably wouldn't have remembered any of it. And that scene built up the angst nicely.

Thanks again so much for writing this for me! It's awesome! I love it!

Btw, I love Glee, although I'm behind on a few episodes. Nice touch!

Reply

acacia_123 March 28 2011, 17:30:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!
and i hope i didn't spoil you too much on glee (sorry)

As i was writing this i started to dislike Chris cuz he was almost pathetic and that's so not the way i usually write him.

Reply


karmic_fic March 25 2011, 10:24:48 UTC
so much fun! thank you for sharing!!!

Reply

acacia_123 March 28 2011, 17:31:04 UTC
thanks for reading

Reply


the_deep_magic March 26 2011, 04:03:15 UTC
Awww, shy!Chris is so sweet! And I'm so glad he finally got up the nerve to tell Zach!

Reply

acacia_123 March 28 2011, 17:31:52 UTC
it took him long enough!
lol glad you enjoyed

Reply


therumjournals March 27 2011, 14:09:42 UTC
“You want a piece of the Zach Attack.”
“Don’t call him that, please.” - call him that please!

“But I’m the princess” - AH HA HA! oh chris!

Reply

acacia_123 March 28 2011, 17:34:26 UTC
lol I'm glad you found that funny.
thanks for reading

i was so sure everyone was going to take 'zack attack' as a saved by the bell reference.

Reply


treksnoopy March 28 2011, 02:21:11 UTC
This is wonderful!

Reply

acacia_123 March 28 2011, 17:34:46 UTC
thanks!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up