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Team Gen: L

Mar 12, 2007 11:39

Title: "L"
Author: junesrose
Team: Gen
Prompt: Lies
Rating: PG
Pairings/Characters: Hint of R/Hr, H/Hr
Warnings: none
Length: just over 1000 words
Summary: Ron becomes philosophical; set summer of 7th year

Authors Notes: This "assignment" was a challenge I gave myself. Although I don't profess to be a writer, I have recently ( Read more... )

prompt: lies, team gen, fic

Comments 11

aome March 12 2007, 17:54:48 UTC

Nice use of Ron's GoF reaction to support your story. Hadn't thought about it like that.

hildigunnur March 12 2007, 18:55:14 UTC

Interesting take on canon there and good use of the prompt .

hildigunnur March 12 2007, 21:33:42 UTC

I agree with the comment above, but also wonder how canon Ginny fits into this?

wolfiekins March 12 2007, 19:28:19 UTC

I really enjoyed this, especially considering the soft spot I have for the GOF spat as a turning point in Ron and Harry's relationship...nicely done!

verdenia March 13 2007, 09:45:12 UTC

I thought this portrayed Ron very well, particularly the wanting to maintain the peace and not rock the boat aspect of it.
& poor guy, it's eating him up inside! I could really feel his anguish.

Great use of the GoF canon as back-up.

abigail89 March 13 2007, 12:54:12 UTC

Ooh, very nice use of canon and reflection on Ron's part. I liked Ron's take on how he views Harry and Hermione.

Nice work!