Comments | tribebohemian: The Radix

tribebohemian

The Radix

Oct 10, 2009 22:32

Comments 6

Look into the future.. anonymous October 16 2009, 17:52:56 UTC

w0w!!!!!
Oh no! No I've gone through all the chapters here aswell!
You got me addicted!!!
I need more *whines :P*

Hope you update this one soon aswell!

Hugz,

Velasca (from triberevival)

nemesisofamor October 17 2009, 13:33:56 UTC

Love your Ebony! Finally a character development that makes sense! She so would be intrigued by those warriors and eager to learn their tactics ( ... )

tribebohemian October 17 2009, 19:05:38 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and for such a thorough review :) I must say that I've always been a bit proud of this chapter. Perhaps too proud, but there it is :lol ( ... )

nemesisofamor October 17 2009, 20:18:16 UTC

A well, being fair is hard and not everytime achieved in writing, because there always is a subjective pov. But I couldn't tell from your writing that you don't like Jay/Amber as characters much. It was very balanced, and that's not the easiest task! The other characters I'm still waiting to read more about.

anonymous October 25 2009, 22:20:33 UTC

I'll just re-read the story here, since I keep checking FF.net for updates. Your writing style keeps amazing me, so I really enjoy reading this stuff again.

Thank you for writing a worthy Tribe fan fiction.

tribebohemian November 6 2009, 01:55:39 UTC

to whomever wote this, thank you very much :) I apologize for not updating on FF.net. It's been a rough year but isn't that always my excuse? I appreciate that you're still reading and that you still think my story is worth it.