Powerful; Heroes; Mohinder/Sylar; FRT

[tricias_flaunt]

Title: Powerful
Fandom/original: Heroes
Characters: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG
Word count: 424
A/N: For the current 15_minute_fic prompt. Feedback much appreciated.
Summary: Power is beauty

Comments

[whatwas]

I think you got Sylar dead on in his pursuit to have more power, to be more "special"..... also loved that he wants to completely change Mohinder to be his, because that's what he wants....
great job on this.

[tricias_flaunt]

Thank you. Somehow Sylar's thought proces came to me easily. I always felt that Sylar has a certain gravitation toward Mohinder in a possessive sort of way. Glad you liked it and thanks for the comment.

[ivy_b]

Oh my. That was kinda hot without anything going on! Sylar's musings were dead on and I actually want you to write Sylar "refining" Mohinder like you suggested. It sounds like the making of a great angsty fic.

[tricias_flaunt]

I had an idea of writing about the "brokenness" of them both, which is a favourite topic of mine no matter what fandom I'm in. I'll probably attempt it sometime when I'm done with this huge backlog of fics. XD I'm glad you thought Sylar was in character. Thanks! Glad you liked it.

[kael_raye]

That was very well done! Sylar was very well written in this, you nailed him. Now I want to see Sylar 'fixing' Mohinder...

[tricias_flaunt]

I have given much thought to the 'fixing' part actually. Now just to see whether I ever manage to type it out in words. XD

Thanks! Glad you thought it was well done. Thanks for the feedback.

[angary]

I think this was a great fic from Sylar's POV - the diction is what I imagine his thought process would be, to a T. Great job!

[tricias_flaunt]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[ladywilde80]

That was lovely, yup - totally Sylar all the way... loved it!

[tricias_flaunt]

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for your comment.

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