Comments | tricias_flaunt: A Twisted Road; Peter/Nathan; Heroes; PG-13

tricias_flaunt

A Twisted Road; Peter/Nathan; Heroes; PG-13

Sep 13, 2007 13:05

Title: A Twisted Road
Rating: PG-13
Words: 3901
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Summary: "Oh, so you do know how to read maps, after all." It is after the near-apoclypse and Peter and Nathan are together again, on the run. What would be better than say, a road trip?
Warnings: Set after S1, does not correlate with any S2 spoilers.
A/N: Many thanks to karathephantom. A ( Read more... )

peter/nathan, heroes, fic

Comments 14

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tricias_flaunt September 14 2007, 02:59:36 UTC

I loved writing this as well, even though I don't usually write lighter pieces. Petrellicest moments are always good. *purrs* Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

i_am_the_crime September 13 2007, 08:48:15 UTC

Just lovely. :)

tricias_flaunt September 14 2007, 02:59:50 UTC

Thank you!

sundaysonggirl September 13 2007, 11:22:29 UTC

That's my first fic I read and it's really lovely!
I like this sentence very much:
"If there isn't a God then he can sin all he wants or let this moment go, go away again like so many moments in the past that slipped away from him because it is wrong and wrong and wrong."
<3

tricias_flaunt September 14 2007, 03:00:53 UTC

Oh! I'm flattered. I hope this has pulled you over into at least considering the dark side of Petrellicest. *grins*

Glad you liked that sentence. It's one of my favourites as well.

liritarofrohan September 13 2007, 14:51:10 UTC

Awww. That's just fucking cute. *Grins*

tricias_flaunt September 14 2007, 03:01:06 UTC

Glad you liked it! XD

liritarofrohan September 14 2007, 04:33:21 UTC

Any time.

ctheinvisible17 September 13 2007, 14:58:18 UTC

I really enjoyed this. And I usually have a list of things to point out about stories, so here goes...

The only way they are going to talk to Linderman is by talking to a corpse with a hole in the back of his head. :P

I think you have a thing for the Nissan Versa car, like Hiro. ^_^

I like how you wrote both of them at the convenience store. So adorable...

I really liked this line: the whole locker room "you're a guy and I'm a guy so what's there to worry about" thing. LoL.

It's weird. Ever since I told one person I like the hugging from behind thing, everyone has been writing it in their stories. It's one of those things that gets me every time. *sighs happily* :)

Oh, and Road Trip!!! :D Okay I better stop now before I comment on every line. Thanks for the great read.

tricias_flaunt September 14 2007, 03:05:08 UTC

Welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it because it was really fun to write.

The only way they are going to talk to Linderman is by talking to a corpse with a hole in the back of his head. :P

Well, I was thinking that they drop by his house to get some answers... not talk to him, but haha! Yeah, that does sound like they're going to want to talk to him. Oh well. XD

Nissan Versa is the only car in Heroes. You must bow to the fact.

The locker room line I actually use it myself in real life, but change the guy to girl around and you'll have it down pat. And I've used "I don't have anything that you don't as well, right?" before. Stole that from another friend. XD

The hugging thing has always been my thing. And brick wall kisses. And rain kisses. I've been writing a lot of those since I started writing fanfiction. Haha.