i honestly read it and i say you did very well, especially for a rough draft. i agree that it is entirely the media's fault. i can relate to your paper not with the weight portion, but rather my unpretty looks until i took action to take care of my appearance and become presentable. i don't have much to critique you on, if that's what you wanted. however, it's a sad situation that we have all been dealt. i have always known in my mind that these superficial things never mattered much to me, or rather that mental things such as personality and morality should always be placed on a higher level. those are my thoughts on your paper.. what was the assignment exactly?
i agree with your insight. the paper was on the emphasis that american culture puts on people to look a certain way. there are a bunch of questiions that go along with it and we had to read some articles and incorporate them into the paper. out of curiosity, did paragraphs 3-6 make you crack up non-stop? hopefully it did and if you couldn't tell, alex and i were completely stoned while writing it... such crazy times...
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i don't have much to critique you on, if that's what you wanted. however, it's a sad situation that we have all been dealt. i have always known in my mind that these superficial things never mattered much to me, or rather that mental things such as personality and morality should always be placed on a higher level.
those are my thoughts on your paper..
what was the assignment exactly?
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the paper was on the emphasis that american culture puts on people to look a certain way.
there are a bunch of questiions that go along with it and we had to read some articles and incorporate them into the paper.
out of curiosity, did paragraphs 3-6 make you crack up non-stop?
hopefully it did and if you couldn't tell, alex and i were completely stoned while writing it...
such crazy times...
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i'd like to read the final copy if that's cool :)
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