Past, Present & Future, Chapter 9b

Jul 01, 2011 17:30

Title: Past, Present & Future
Author: trieze0713
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu
Length: Chaptered
Genres: AU, Drama, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG

~Previous Chapters~


Chapter 9b

Yunho had been discussing about Moonbin’s terms of scholarship with Park Yoochun for an hour in his office. Apparently he offered that Moonbin to transfer to a new ( Read more... )

past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

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zoevo July 1 2011, 13:35:17 UTC
I don't know if I'm emotional recently or not but I teared up in almost every chapter of this fic, T_T. I think it's because of your writing, simple but inspiring so much emotion.
I freaking love their meeting.
Firstly, I love that Jae went straight to the point and begged for Yun being back with him. It's a nice surprise to me that Yun's passion for Jae is still that strong but then it's heart-breaking...
However, I can' blame Jae since it's normal to be shocked touching the prosthesis for the first time esp. when being so lost in the heat and completely forgetting about its existence.
What a pity when Yun had seemed to be more than willing to be back with Jae before that and now Jae will maybe take the rough way through Moonbin to get Yun.
Can't wait for the next update!

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trieze0713 July 4 2011, 15:36:34 UTC
I'm glad that you like their meeting and approved of Jae's action to tell Yun about his feelings. Heartbreaking as it was, honesty will somehow reach to the other party's heart, don't you think? :D

Update will be posted shortly... thanks so much for keep reading so far :)

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Shitty JJ falcon2339 July 1 2011, 14:31:58 UTC
I can't believe JJ did that........oh my god, he is so shitty. It is as if he had not hurt YH enough. This has almost certainly sealed his fate with YH. I feel so sorry for YH, to be hurt time and again by the one he love. This is gonna make JJ regret later. YH seems to have really let go of any hope. I can't blame him for this. It is all JJ's fault. Ptui!!!!!!!!! I could spit on JJ's face. (Ya you can laugh at my "ptui"!!!!!) Spice up the story.....make JJ suffer and make him suffer bad for this. I had not expected that you would create a second disappoinment for YH. I hate see YH hurt but i have to admit that it sure spices up the story.......thanks for it. I enjoy this. At the rate your plot goes, bucket or buckets is not gonna suffice for my saliva...... I need a tank, haha...........Good writing and as usual, thanks. Errrrrrrh......do wait too long until my tanker overflows, ok?

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Re: Shitty JJ trieze0713 July 4 2011, 15:39:33 UTC
Though he hurts so much, don't you think that it's also a good thing for him to sort out his feeling? Though pretty much different than what JJ was expecting :)

Don't worry bb... chapter 10 will be posted shortly after I'm done replying the comments here *wink* Thank you bb, will be waiting for your comment again ;)

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spring_shine July 1 2011, 14:39:30 UTC
Ah... I really bawled reading this part T-T
It's hurt for Yunho.. he looks like he wants to but with his condition., he restrains himself..
thanks for update! Will be waiting for the next chapter :)

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trieze0713 July 4 2011, 15:42:47 UTC
Oh bb, I was crying too while writing this chapter T___T
I'm going to post Chapter 10 shortly though, I hope it won't make you cry though. Thanks for commenting, I appreciate it :)

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trieze0713 July 4 2011, 15:45:42 UTC
i hope you understand jae's reaction, it will be explained in the next chapter.
i'll update shortly, thanks for commenting, will look forward for it again in the next chapter...

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n3uromanc3r July 1 2011, 16:08:17 UTC
Oh, yes this story and the JDrama what I'm watching lately 'Umareru' always make me completely emotional, it's official, I can't help ( ... )

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trieze0713 July 4 2011, 16:00:08 UTC
Oooh, I'm glad to read your comment... such comment always inspire me write more, better and faster :)
I hope you also like the next chapter that I'm going to post shortly.

YunJae's first meeting will be writen later on as a side story, please be patient with me. Thank you!

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