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trieze0713

Past, Present & Future, Chapter 11b

Jul 15, 2011 19:32

Title: Past, Present & Future
Author: trieze0713
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu
Length: Chaptered
Genres: AU, Drama, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG

~Previous Chapters~

Chapter 11b

It was a beautiful funeral with only a few people attending. It was Yunho’s request to make it a private one. Other than him, Changmin, Min Sook and people from their ( Read more... )

past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

Comments 43

crossing_by July 15 2011, 16:26:20 UTC

i need the chapte 12
i need the second will ... why 4 years ??? why ??? (and you will sing 'keep you head down' kekekke)

anyway, nothing much to comment
i mean i dont have any emotion on this chapter
well yeah i sad (not so sad) for yun appa say farewell for the world

but theres a thing its tingling me a little
the will ... somehow min know about the will, well i mean he made the plan for leaving all behind after make sure yun back to Jung Corp.
hmmm ... or thats just me :D

chapter 12 please ... and not too long i hope

hey, if its a real drama ... the portion of jae show very little hahahaha
well at least he show, junsu not there :P

trieze0713 July 18 2011, 08:51:45 UTC

Min is a genius after all, surely he saw it coming all along? LOL
Chapter 12 in the making... be patient bb :0)

Well, Jae will have more appearance when Min is out of the picture temporarily... I'm being fair here ROFL

aoktoga July 15 2011, 19:31:55 UTC

things will start to change now, since yunho is back in his old life.
I wonder whether changmin is really happy with his father's will to let him step away from the position as CEO of jung's corp or he's just acting tough cause he knew that he's only a mere substitute for his older brother?

trieze0713 July 18 2011, 08:52:50 UTC

There will be a lot of change in everyone's life form this point forward :(
Changmin is a smart guy, I'm sure he knows more than everyone else ;)
Thanks for reading until now dear...

zetsu2326 July 15 2011, 19:44:16 UTC

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa first of all I cried while reading the scene of reunion between yunho and his father. T____________________T it was so sad ;O ( ... )

trieze0713 July 18 2011, 10:02:29 UTC

We never know how much anyone mean to us until we lose them... sadly that's the truth. But I'm glad that there's no hatred between father & son at the last moment.

Jae will strive to get Yun's attention... and Yun will have his own fight to earn the trust of the company's boards.

Min & his Appa's real relationship will be revealed more in the next chapter, but the rest nearing the end of the fic as the second will be read.

Thank you Zetsu, see you again in the next chapter :)

Touching Death Scene falcon2339 July 16 2011, 01:01:18 UTC

Wow, YH's father's death scene is really touching and very well written. (I was on the verge of tears when I read it, no joking!!!)I felt as if I was there when reading it. It is sad and no matter what preceded, blood is always thicker than water - time for forgiveness ( ... )

Re: Touching Death Scene trieze0713 July 18 2011, 09:59:17 UTC

Thanks if you thing it's a good scene. It's based on my brother's last moment with my mom. I was 10 mins late, he was the one who told my mom not to wait for me if she's tired. So yeah... it's personal :)

Nope, it was only said that JJ saw Yunho received a check from his dad's man. But Yunho hadn't had the chance to explain to him why he took it. I will reveal it soon.

The second will only related to the step brothers, Yun & Min. But of course, it will also change the life of JJ & Bin. Min knows more than we thought he did... he saw it coming (the will) & it's obvious that he's kind of expecting it. Will be revealed nearing the ending too.

JJ will go into action soon bb... you can expect it coming! LOL I can't wait that long too!

I feel more grateful that there are people who are actually love my fics :) Thank you so much, I'm trying to finish up Chap 12 asap. Take care ;)

n3uromanc3r July 16 2011, 23:05:34 UTC

It's not fair, you made me cry again!

I really liked Changmin's cool attitude how he reacted to his father's will! I wonder what's in the 2nd document and whether Yunho will finish his studies how his father requested.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

( ... )

trieze0713 July 18 2011, 09:36:41 UTC

Oh, sorry bb, I cried myself when I wrote this chapter though T___T

I guess everyone is more curious about the 2nd will, eh? LOL Let's just say that everyone will live according to their free will ;)

I'm trying hard to finish up chap 12 now... hopefully I can update within this week. Thanks for keep reading so far!