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trieze0713

Past, Present & Future, Chapter 13

Sep 08, 2011 18:36

Chapter 13: Surprises & Emotions

Yunho was chatting with Jihye in his office when he heard a commotion outside his door. Before he got a chance to stand up and check with his secretary his office door was opened wide and there stood someone with a familiar face holding a bottle of expensive wine and a bouquet white rose.

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past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

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trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:51:29 UTC

you're not missing anything dear, it was intended cause what's happened in the missing years will be revealed little by little in the next chapters :)

You think there's no improvement? Even when Yunho has softened up to Jae? Though he didn't say it and show it to his face :)
Thanks for your patience, there will be more improvement for sure :D

crystaldee September 8 2011, 13:41:11 UTC

Awwwww my poor baby....he suffered enough.
I hope you can make him happy again even if it's not because of YunHo.
He already have a lot of stressful life since he cam out to his father. Being beaten because he's gay...

MoonBin...he just care to comeback to Yun, then let him leave.

Waiting for the next part!! ^__^

PS: Ga jadi ngepost seblom liburan yah? Kekekekekkeke....
Gimana US?

trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:56:01 UTC

Dee, gak jadi nge'post sebelum berangkat krn si boss nyuruh2 macem2 in last minute! nyebelin deh...
US was great thought the weather difference between SF & Anaheim shocked me! SF was cold and Anaheim was above 40C degrees!

Our baby will be happy :) He's not suffering much while living with Jae except that he's missing his Appa! Ha3x

Next part is a long one, it's in the making, I hope to finish this weekend ;) Thanks bb!

uchie07 September 8 2011, 14:21:14 UTC

I guess jae's insecurity has taken it's toll and ruining everything.. But when u end it w/ jae having a bloody cough fit, I think there are other reason...
U almost got me fooled. U just have to jump 2 years to ff the story and w/o notice too... So mean....

trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:58:38 UTC

Awww, I'm sorry bb, didn't mean to be so cruel :D But I want to have a little "breath holding" before a "sigh of relief" in the next chapter :D
Let's hope for more happiness in the next chapter! Working hard to finish it right now :) Thank you for keep reading though I annoyed you with this chapter *wink*

ext_640030 September 8 2011, 16:21:36 UTC

oh my!! this is soooooooo good!!! really!!!! love the time jump :-) love jae's angst...love the character's dynamics...can't wait for the next chapter...thank u!!!!

trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:59:15 UTC

And thanks for reading & commenting in every chapter! Time skip will be explained in the next chapter ;) Thanks bb!

chloe1910 September 8 2011, 17:14:59 UTC

T_T I wrote a bloody long comment about Jae, guess on why he cough blood and fainted, Moonbin and his mom and their situation but stupid LJ ATE it up!!! Not gonna retype cause so damn pissed with LJ now.

PS: Hope you'll fill us in on the gaps of the time jump in future chapters, especially how Moonbin come about to living with Jae.

trieze0713 September 9 2011, 04:04:25 UTC

Awww, I'm sorry about that long comment! T___T I always kind of waiting to read yours to get more inspiration :) *pat pat* Yeah, LJ really pissed me off now, I even had to edit this posting a couple of times before I got it right!

Yes, that's how I planned it... to reveal the gaps little by little through conversations & thoughts in the future chapters :) Thank you bb, appreciate your 'missing' comment still... :)