Past, Present & Future, Chapter 14

Sep 10, 2011 21:00


Chapter 14: Turning over a new leaf.

Moonbin swept his gaze around the place that had been his sanctuary for almost 3 years. The place where he slept, he cried when he missed his father and uncle, where he was thinking about his life… He felt sad to leave the place, but a lot happier remembering that he’s going home to his real family again.
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Wow, that's quick!!!! falcon2339 September 10 2011, 15:12:51 UTC
Wow, I didn't expect you to update THAT quickly!!!! Thanks. Glad that JJ's mum and MB have come to an understanding. But I still don't understand why MB is living with JJ. Is this one of the conditions of the scholarship? And why would MB need a scholarship now that his dad is super rich? Hope you will clarify it later. I am glad though that MB goes back to where he really belong......somewhere that loves him unconditionally. And not smeone that uses him only. I am still sore at JJ for makinng ue of MB only. Serves JJ right (ya...a sadist atwork here, haha!) Having said this, I still long for more "tddorture

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Re: Wow, that's quick!!!! trieze0713 September 12 2011, 04:47:14 UTC
Relax bb, everything will be completely revealed in Chapter 15. If I combined everything into 1 chapter it would be too long and too tiring for me to write emotionally LOL
More torture for JJ? Ouch, I pity him already bb! :) Ha3x Let's see first how what's he going to do when he recovers *wink*

I can see that you're totally smitten by Moonbin :D Thanks bb! Will try to be back soon ;)

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trieze0713 September 12 2011, 04:50:51 UTC
THere's a reason why Yunho accepted Moonbin easily. They kept in touch during those 3 years. Trying to finish off the next chapter now, thanks for reading it so far!

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trieze0713 September 12 2011, 04:51:51 UTC
It's fast because it's written halfway with the previous chapter :D Thank you for loving it, that really makes me inspired to write better bb! *hugs*

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trieze0713 September 12 2011, 06:58:25 UTC
hahaha new story will have to wait until I finish this one :) But yes, the plot's ready. Maybe another oneshot in the near future ;) Thanks bb!

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linjae September 10 2011, 16:02:35 UTC
omg omg very fast!!!!!! hahaha <3
owww moonbin finally back to yunhoo XDD
poor jae ;(
thanks for update!!! <3

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trieze0713 September 12 2011, 04:53:38 UTC
Yeah, at first it should be part of the previous chapter but then it became too long ha3x
Thanks for reading & of course, the comment ;)

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yunho_ism September 10 2011, 16:03:44 UTC
spot. bbl. i still haven't read the previous chap. OTL

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trieze0713 September 12 2011, 04:54:03 UTC
spot's yours! :)

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yunho_ism September 12 2011, 14:37:42 UTC
just finished reading this and the previous chapter.
whoa. i didn't expect the time skip, bb.
so many things happened. i wonder why bin is with jae now.
but i'm sure you'll explain it eventually.
srsly though, jae needs to stop destroying himself. :(
maybe now that his mother is willing to bond with him, he'll slowly heal.
and it's nice to see yunho and moonbin finally reunited.
yunho must have missed his son so bad.
it's good that moonbin's such a smart and mature kid.
kinda sad that he didn't get to be close with jae though.
thanks for the updates. :)

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