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trieze0713

It's The Little Things

Oct 04, 2011 19:05

Title: It’s The Little Things
Author: trieze0713
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Length: oneshot
Genres: AU, Romance
Rating: PG

Summary:

It’s not always the pretty things that make you fall in love with someone.
( It’s the little things that he does that make you alive. )

oneshot, fanfic, yunjae

Comments 149

donud October 4 2011, 21:35:22 UTC

omg so sweet!!!!!!!

trieze0713 October 5 2011, 10:57:48 UTC

Glad that it's to your liking ;) Thanks!

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trieze0713 October 5 2011, 10:58:25 UTC

Aigooooo, I hope you're not crying anymore now LOL
Thank you for the kind comment ;)

qer_lee October 5 2011, 00:54:07 UTC

XD.. awwwww!!! this is so romantic..!!
"It’s the little things that he do that makes you alive." waw...
i fall inlove with this fic..!!! I almost cry when Jae asked for the divorce.. Yun is so considerated! why u hav to be so forgetable too Y_Y
Love it ..thanks!!! ♥♥♥♥

trieze0713 October 5 2011, 10:59:41 UTC

Some guys are like that, forgettable of important dates because they think it's not that important LOL my Dad was! :p
Thank you for reading & leaving a comment, that's nice :)

linjae October 5 2011, 01:44:09 UTC

omg omg.... this's so sweet!!!!!!! *tearyeyes*
love this!! :D

trieze0713 October 5 2011, 11:00:51 UTC

LOL yay! Glad that I make you happy! :) Thanks for reading bb!

kazemomo October 5 2011, 01:47:23 UTC

this is such a great oneshot. at first i'm teary because of sadness and then i'm crying because of happiness. how can you pull out those emotions?

to add more to this, in L.A. we read a sonnet from shakespeare that was about love never dying even though time has passed and you'll still love the person even if the person has a flaw.

to ruin this comment ( ;'( ), i saw some errors:
1) pyjama = pajama
2) "but they only give me 1 hour" = 'but they are only giving me 1 hour'
3) "When the parted with panting breaths" = 'When they parted with panting breaths'
4) "they had all these florists along te way" = 'they had all these florists along the way'

trieze0713 October 5 2011, 11:04:26 UTC

Didn't think that it was that good though, just found out the romance in me through this fic LOL

I guess to really love someone mean you can love both his/her goodness & flaws :D

You're not ruining anything, I really appreciate. I didn't check the grammar, I wrote it in an hour. Once done, I posted it. I actually realized the grammatical errors on the way home, there we more but I managed to revised them through my mobile... gave up after 10 minuted trying to fix them all, I have bad eyes and too tired to go online when it's already 10pm! LOL Fixed them now, thanks again!