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Past, Present & Future, Chapter 17

Oct 23, 2011 21:45

~ Previous Chapters ~

Chapter 17: Brothers

There’s a sound of running water in the bathroom and then someone pulled on his blanket.

“Rise and shine! Get up you lazy bum! And help me to clean up the house and do some shopping!”

“Hmmm… another half an hour…”

“No can do. You promised last night that you’ll wake up early. It’s already a quarter past 8.”
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past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

Comments 26

crystaldee October 23 2011, 15:57:52 UTC

Kakakkaka...Jae give up...
And now he's again throwing his dignity to chase Yunnie again...
I hope he's doing it right...^___^

Waiting for the next part ^____^

trieze0713 October 25 2011, 08:05:58 UTC

oh yeah, Yun's playing hard to get now LOL

Working on the next part... a bit scatterbrain now, so might take a while ;) Thanks bb!

Aw...poor Changmin falcon2339 October 23 2011, 16:03:10 UTC

Wow...CM is so self-sacrifing. I guessed what he said makes sense, since YH is the only one that cares for him. Glad that he and YH discover the true meaning of brotherhood. I am curious as to what JJ will do to make YH, his.......hahaha. More surprises?

Re: Aw...poor Changmin trieze0713 October 25 2011, 08:07:31 UTC

Hhhmm, I personally think that he's too self-sacrificing Ha3x But he's had his good part and I guess he wants to stay away from the unwanted attention :)
Working on the next part, really it's not easy when it comes closer to the ending LOL Thanks bb!

n3uromanc3r October 23 2011, 17:41:31 UTC

I'm so glad that Jihye and Moonbin were able to arrange this meeting between the brothers finally! Actually I thought that the reason of Changmin's disappearance was that he somehow got to know the truth about his real father... or that Yunho's father wasn't his father too.

And I'm also glad that Jihye and Changmin are together, Changmin really needed someone in his life! : D

And Jae's worry is really cute, I can't wait for his next move!

trieze0713 October 25 2011, 08:09:06 UTC

Ah, more about the brothers at the end of the story :)
At least Jihye can put some senses into his head hahaha
Thanks for reading, and Jae will practically throw himself to Yunho! LOL

uchie07 October 23 2011, 23:48:25 UTC

kekeke.. good choice jae.. win ur man back.. get moonbin and min to be ur ally...

trieze0713 October 25 2011, 08:09:42 UTC

Min had done his part and Moonbin will do it without him asking I think hahaha Thanks for enjoying it :)

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trieze0713 October 25 2011, 08:10:32 UTC

Viva to the brotherhood! LOL
Jae just have to work harder to win Yunho back *wink* Thanks bb!