Everything Happens For a Reason, Chapter 5

Jan 07, 2011 19:07

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Chapter 5

Everybody was gathering in Yunho’s bedroom now, watching over Soon Mi’s figure sleeping soundly on the bed. The doctor gave her a shot of valium to make her sleep through the day. She shouldn’t be going through anymore emotional roller coaster today. She should be ready to hear the lab result at the hospital tomorrow ( Read more... )

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ianthology January 7 2011, 12:37:33 UTC
*sobs* that was so sad!
i hope you update soon! the story is really good :)

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trieze0713 January 7 2011, 13:18:33 UTC
Thank you! Will do my best on the weekend :D
Fighting!!

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4gtnangel January 7 2011, 12:43:53 UTC
Dat was devastating for jaejoong. I know ur story goes dat joongie will learn to forgive yunho. I hope he doesn't. Picking up ur self when d one u love shatters u is hard enough and from d looks of it he will have to take care of d other womans kids too. I think that will be much for joongie.

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4gtnangel January 7 2011, 12:44:44 UTC
Just saying it's still ur story. Hihihi.

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trieze0713 January 7 2011, 13:19:24 UTC
Hahaha seeing things from other's point of view is always a good thing :D
Thanks for reading & commenting ;)

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4gtnangel January 7 2011, 17:47:37 UTC
Hihihi. Thanks for the reply. It's just frustrating sometimes to see all the pain dat one has endure and just because of love everything should be fine. I always say dis at
My comments but maybe it's ok for joongie to forgive but he must not forget what was done to him but instead to use it as a lesson so dat he won't get hurt anymore. Selfpreservation might be the word I'm looking for. Can't wait for the next update!

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h3r0k155 January 7 2011, 12:45:10 UTC
Ahh, the angst really killed me, I'm afraid I can't handle it anymore T_T
You write this so beautifully n you already captured my heart with this story. I usually avoid this kind of fic but I'm so curious of what happen in this fic. I think I need to prepare my heart to face another angsty scene XD
I LOVE IT! Thanks for sharing ^-^ *hugs*

Kei

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trieze0713 January 7 2011, 13:20:22 UTC
Thanks for the compliment, encourage me to write more :)
Oh, even I cried while writing T___T

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h3r0k155 January 7 2011, 14:43:47 UTC
YES! You should write more so I can read your new chapter like... Every day XD
Hope your muse never leave your side ^.~

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It's SO SAD.... falcon2339 January 7 2011, 13:02:14 UTC
I actually cried reading this....(Damn you for making me shed tears.....; {hope you are not offended!!!!}) This is a good piece of fanfic. Let's put it this way; I don't cry over many fanfics. The way you depicted JJ's feelings is marvellous; the word; the thoughts......I really love it. Please update soon....I am so in into this that I read this immediately upon reaching home from work. Would you believe it that I put my dinner and bath on hold just to finish reading these 2 chapters??????? (By the way, don't update in the middle of the night because I bet you I will get up and read it even if it is 3am....., no kidding)....

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Re: It's SO SAD.... trieze0713 January 7 2011, 13:22:59 UTC
Oh wow! Thanks! I'm happy noe *grinningmadly*
Honestly, I shed so many tears while writing. I'm sorry that it's too angst for you but I said before that 50% is taken from real story around me T___T so yeah... this kind of things happen..
Thanks for the comment! I'll try to write much on weekend!

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Re: It's SO SAD.... falcon2339 January 7 2011, 13:39:39 UTC
You know what??? While I was reading your fanfic, it did cross my mind that you could have written this from either some personal/someone else's experience. I was partially right. To be able to portray the feelings/thoughts so vividly is not easy; either you have experienced it or someone else has. But whoever it is, I wish that person well and hope that it turns out well. I have seen simmilar cases that seemed to pop out of fictional stories but these DO happen. Do convey my well wishes to whoever it is. Having said that, PLEASE UPDATE.....haha.....

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