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Everything Happens For a Reason, Chapter 16

Mar 08, 2011 19:16

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Chapter 16: The Sick Boy, The Friendly Doctor and Priority

By Monday, Jaejoong was a total wreck. He sported black eyes and definitely unattractive eyebags. Moonbin had been running a high fever since his birthday night on Saturday and for 2 nights he had only had a couple of hours sleeping watching over the little boy. His ( Read more... )

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chloe1910 March 8 2011, 12:28:31 UTC

Updates!!Yay!

*run off to read*

chloe1910 March 8 2011, 12:39:24 UTC

Ah, our Kim Junsu finally made his appearance. How an amicable character :)

Jaejoong is more like Moonbin's father than Yunho. Poor Moonbin, I know Minyoung is really sick, but he should be slightly fairer to Moonbin too.

I could understand why Jae is so protective of Moonbin. I hope he'll discuss things over with Yoochun calmly and make Yoochun understand his decision.

trieze0713 March 8 2011, 14:22:20 UTC

Here comes doctor duckbutt LOL he won't heal Binnie only but maybe Yoochun as well *wink*

Yunho will learn the hard way of being a fair father for both children... Of course, after a kick in the butt by Jejussi! ;)

Thank you for your great comment as always!

hyungie March 8 2011, 12:46:24 UTC

what a great surprise~! =) cant wait to see what happens next ^^

hope you're doing ok too? *pokes pokes*

trieze0713 March 8 2011, 14:24:24 UTC

Thanks dear, I'm fine :) still have to undergo one more check in a month, but I feel great! Thanks to readers like you ;)

More surprises coming along... Hopefuly in the next couple of days.

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trieze0713 March 8 2011, 14:27:17 UTC

Jae didn't forget who's Binnie's father, he just needs to ensure the child's welfare. And Yunho will have to try hard to prove him :)

Thanks for reading & commenting! :D

Ya......you brought in Junsu falcon2339 March 8 2011, 13:16:28 UTC

I am soooooo happy that you brought in JS. Can't wait for Daddy Jung to get a kick from Jejussi....haha.....Make it real hot and start fanning the winds of jealousy. I feel so sorry for Moonbin and hopes that YH gets his just dessert from JJ. Bring it on!!! I know I sound sadistic but that is what YH deserves for treating not one, but two people badly. Will sparks fly between JS and YC? Poor JJ is so affected by all this even though MB is not his kid. Seems that he always get hurt on account of YH. Make YH suffer; especially from the pangs of jealousy. Love your story. Dang, now I know that you are finishing the next chapter, I will be waking up in the middle of the night to check..heehee. This is worth getting up for!!!!!!

Re: Ya......you brought in Junsu trieze0713 March 8 2011, 14:32:14 UTC

Daddy Jung will swallow a bitter pill from both Jejussi and dear little Binnie!
Oh ho, jealousy will spark in the next chapter...
Take your time and sleep bebe, I'm still trying to tame Jejussi here not to give Daddy a painful kick! LOL
Give me a cpuple of days to tweak the line here and there, it will be a long one!

I promise that the friendly doctor Kim will have more appearance too ;) Thank you as always!

yunho_ism March 8 2011, 13:18:09 UTC

spotting. brb after dinner. :3

yunho_ism March 8 2011, 15:12:25 UTC

Aw... Chun's getting neglected. :(
but Moonbin needs the affection now too.
Hope things ease up between them soon.
Waaaah~ Junsu's their pedia.
Thanks for the update, bb.<3

trieze0713 March 9 2011, 03:10:21 UTC

Hey ya' Headmaster! Been busy?
Things will get rough for a little while but eventually will get better for the lot of them :D
Thanks as always bebe!