Fic: The Line Begins to Blur

[trina_crys]

Title: The Line Begins To Blur
Author: Crystal
Rating: NC-17
Content: Angsty Tommy, Pretty Boy Sex
Characters: Adam Lambert/Tommy Joe Ratliff
Notes: Somewhat inspired by "Always" by Saliva. My very angsty comfused Tommy muse would not stop talking to me. So here we are ;-)

Comments

[thrace_adams]

That was hot too.

[trina_crys]

Glad you liked it :)

[mtnwomanbc]

That was one of the hottest, most angsty first person POV fics I have ever read. Wow. Tommy's fighting it the whole way, even though he knows *resistance is futile*.

I absolutely love your last paragraph, especially the last sentence: "I still have no words to say. I can't muster them. My eyes flutter, the surroundings beginning to fade. Much like the lines drawn in my soul that have begun to blur." Beyond the attitude and angst, he is reaching a state of peace/acceptance about his new situation.

[trina_crys]

Thank you very much. When I wrote that he was totally talking to me the entire time. I was watching it play out through his eyes. I was really into writing this one.

[bm_shipper]

Wow, that was awesome again... and sooooooo hot! I loved it =D

[trina_crys]

Thanks!

[ratbert71]

**claps hands**

I'm excited that I found some of your oneshots!

This was super hot, and what a killer last line.

[trina_crys]

Thanks! Glad you found them too ;-)