Fic: La Familia

[trinityofone]

Title: La Familia (A Puddlejumpers Story)
Rating: PG
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard, Weir/Zelenka
Length: ~2300 words
Summary: They're done with scandal; then Teyla gets pregnant and won't tell anyone who the father is.
A/N: A rather embarrassingly late birthday present for wychwood, the fabulous co-author of this 'verse. It may be cheating a little, but here's a

Comments

[sageness]

Oh, happy sigh. I love this universe. :D

[trinityofone]

Thanks. =) I'm always happy to visit it, myself.

[trinityofone]

Yay! Thank you. I was glad I could give them a little happiness.

[toft_froggy]

(quickfix - Like a great weight has be lifted., should be 'been')

Oohh, that is lovely. I'm really interested to see how much teamfic is going around at the moment, and it's so nice to see that in the Puddlejumper universe too, that sense that they're a family, maybe more than people who are actually related to each other could be. I love how you shifted the focus from John to Teyla here, because I really think she is the centre of the group, in a lot of ways - she's the lynchpin, the link between the alien and earth, military and civilian, and she makes them work. But at the same time, she's set apart from them by virtue of being a woman, actually having social skills, a leader of her own people (baby!), and just generally being enigmatic. But she is awesome, and I love her, and this story is like a love song to her, so I love it too.

[trinityofone]

(Eeep! Thank you!)

I am so, so glad you like it! I love them as a family, too, which I think is really true, even in canon. So-yes, to everything you said! I'm really pleased if the story conveyed any of that.

Gosh, I am inarticulate today!

[dogeared]

Ohhh, pins John down, spreading himself above him like a wave. John gentles, arching up into the offered kiss-and the next, and the next is adfadslkj SO BEAUTIFUL. And the rest is just peaceful and lovely.

[neery]

Whee! I have no time to read this right now, especially since I want to reread the whole Puddlejumpers universe before that, but OMG, this is the fic I've been impatiently waiting for since I caught a little glimpse of it on your laptop (and then you took it away from me, damn you *g*)! Just seeing this on my flist made my day!

[trinityofone]

Hee! I was thinking about that! I was like, "I wonder if neery will remember..." It took me long enough to finish, certainly!