Fic: Without a Hitch (for longleggedgit)

[redpocket]

Author/Artist: origami_angel
For: longleggidgit

Title: Without A Hitch
Characters: Oshitari Yuushi, Atobe Keigo, Akutagawa Jirou [Jirou POV mostly]
Rating: R to NC-17, I'd say.

Disclaimer: Prince of Tennis belongs to Konomi-sensei, not me. I just like messing around with his characters. :D
Warnings: Semi-public sex, Sex with clothes still on, Some frottage, Serious UST.

Comments

[longleggedgit]

kajf;lkejfe Such limited computer access right now but I just wanted to say I'm SO EXCITED to read this threesome and I will come back with a proper review tomorrow at the latest. <3333333333333333333333

[polyurethane]

I'm just glad I was able to please you.

[jazzy_peaches]

Which Jirou thought was ridiculous because sleep was clearly the most important thing in life.

ahahahaha Jirou is so wise. XD

I could have picked so many lines to quote from this, it was great! I love scheming Oshitari. And I definitely want to be Jirou in this fic. Great job!

[polyurethane]

I'm glad it went over well. I was afraid that I was the only person I pleased with this fic.

I wish I could be Jirou too. I was so jealous of him while writing it, haha.

Thanks for the input!

[longleggedgit]

AHHHH this was so incredibly awesome!! Um, first of all, thank you for tackling this threesome, because it was one I really really wanted but I wasn't sure anyone would be willing to go for. :) ajkf;lfe I love the dynamic of these three and you pulled it off really well. I especially like how Oshitari was pretending to be all detached and just hooking them up but CLEARLY he wasn't really and was all mushy and lovey about them (because that's just so how he is).

This line was great: “So, Keigo...what do you say we show Jirou-kun what it’s like when love is involved, nn?” Cause even though it's delivered in Oshitari's all smooth and teasing manner it's actually kind of sweet because he really means it. ;D;

And agh just poor little Jirou thinking no one could ever love him back!! And being mistreated by Marui, lol. Marui, you're such an ass.

He couldn’t wait until later when he’d get to brag to Hiyoshi and Gakuto about how he’d got to have sex with Atobe and Oshitari at the same time. HAHA, right Jirou, because obviously they both

[polyurethane]

Well, now that everything's been revealed, I suppose I can reply to this. ♥

This was actually the easiest choice I could have made when it came to the threesomes you offered up for me. It was a matter of "Which characters would be easiest for me to tackle writing/which would be most fun for me to write?" And this threesome won out. I hadn't written for Oshitari or Atobe for quite some time (hence why it's mostly from Jirou's PoV), but I knew they wouldn't be too hard for me to tackle once again so it made the choice very easy

[longleggedgit]

I support the idea of matching bathrobe sequels. :DDD And I definitely liked the omake! I don't think I could ever NOT like insinuating that every student who goes to Hyoutei is a big poofing queer, because, duh, it's like, a prerequisite. :P

I'm so glad it was a good experience for you! Thanks again. ♥

[polyurethane]

I'll consider writing something. Depends if I can tap into these muses again, haha. And yes, they're all queers. ALL OF THEM. Even the girls.

I really liked it doing this. :D And you're welcome. ♥

[iff_u_loved_me]

awesome- Jirou was totally in character *__*

[polyurethane]

:D

Thanks. I've been writing him so long I guess it can be likened to breathing for me, haha.