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Doujinshi: fata morgana (for giving_ground)

Apr 24, 2008 11:18

Author/Artist: aoiyuzu
For: giving_ground

Title: fata morgana
Characters: YagyuuxYukimuraxNiou
Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: As much as I would like to, I do not own these boys. All Konomi's.
Warnings: This is a doujinshi, so it is NOT dail-up friendly at ALL. Also, there's a lot of kissing with saliva. ;)
Summary: Illusions can be quite real. Set during the senior year ( Read more... )

character: niou, character: yukimura, ! doujinshi, character: yagyuu

Comments 37

numisma April 24 2008, 02:29:41 UTC

Wow, this was just wonderful! I think my favorite part, childishly enough, was Yukimura's insistent ringing of the doorbell. XD

aoiyuzu May 6 2008, 18:19:23 UTC

Hahah thank you. XD Yukimura always came across to me as the impatient type. ;D

kisa829 April 24 2008, 03:22:13 UTC

Beyond amazing...and totally heart wrenching...

aoiyuzu May 6 2008, 18:20:19 UTC

Aw thank you. ^-^ ♥

iff_u_loved_me April 24 2008, 03:26:46 UTC

I don't think I've ever gone from drooling to crying so fast in my entire life- I love love love this - in fact, I'm going to write a fic based on this ^___^

aoiyuzu May 6 2008, 18:21:13 UTC

Oh wow, I'm flattered that you liked it so much. *gives you tissue* Thank you very much!

iff_u_loved_me January 17 2009, 20:30:18 UTC

http://iff-u-loved-me.livejournal.com/58164.html ^^

aoiyuzu January 17 2009, 20:35:54 UTC

f-locked? ^^;

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aoiyuzu May 6 2008, 18:24:04 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it so much. ♥♥ I was worried that it might be a bit confusing for people to get, but I'm relieved to hear that that wasn't the case. :D

crocoduck April 24 2008, 04:04:23 UTC

wow.. so long! I don't even want to think about how long it took for you to make this. your lines are very crisp and purposeful and I think your use of tones is overall enhancing to the entire piece. the kind of radial panels like on the forth page from the end really help to move the story, to pass time.

man I wish you had put page numbers so it would be easier to point things out that I like XD but in particular, I'm very fond of the progression at the top of the page where yukimura begins to kiss yagyuu. some of your paneling choices are so effective--especially in the sex (which is so. hard. to panel). great work anon-san! :D

aoiyuzu May 6 2008, 18:26:41 UTC

Time... X___x The rough sketches took a while, but the inking was a definite rush job. ^^;;;

I'm really happy you liked the paneling! I spent too much time studying other doujinshis to see which paneling style was better suited for sex. My roommate probably thought I was a perv for staring at those pages so much. xD;;; Thank you! ♥