There's so much I love about this, mate. Katie's so brilliantly stubborn and Naomi so perfectly obtuse. And Emily so wonderfully Emily and it's smashing.
What I like the most about it, though, are the small details, like Naomi pushing her finger down onto the crumbs on her plate - perfect imagery that really puts you in that place. And Effy dressing like she's going to a ball for chimney sweeps! Brilliant. I love the way that your mind works and is showing itself all over this story.
The dialogue is cracking and so well written and suited to your version of these characters. Brilliant.
Have I mentioned that I adore that icon? Because I do.
Flis, your thoughts are always appreciated, thank you. We have matching senses of humour, I think. That's why you like my writing and I like yours. Congrats on that ♥
Thanks bb, I'm sorry I didn't reply to your lovely comment earlier. I'm pleased you've enjoyed the ride, and reading about Naomi being a twat has been up your street.
I agree with everything flister and lizardwriter wrote (and lizardwriter, I'm relieved to learn I wasn't the only one checking compulsively for an update). In addition, triptohere, I continue to love your portrayal of the Cookie Monster.
As usual, Naomi manages to be perfectly hilarious while being perfectly obtuse: I especially like "it’s only Sophia, I haven’t unleashed napalm".
I laughed so much in this chapter... sooo much!! Sometimes I just can't believe what Naomi is doing... she's just so... Naomi! ahhhahaahah But my heart is breaking for Katie, poor little thing :(
And I never imagined I would have liked Sophia/napalm LOL
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What I like the most about it, though, are the small details, like Naomi pushing her finger down onto the crumbs on her plate - perfect imagery that really puts you in that place. And Effy dressing like she's going to a ball for chimney sweeps! Brilliant. I love the way that your mind works and is showing itself all over this story.
The dialogue is cracking and so well written and suited to your version of these characters. Brilliant.
Still thoroughly enjoying this. Big ♥
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Flis, your thoughts are always appreciated, thank you. We have matching senses of humour, I think. That's why you like my writing and I like yours. Congrats on that ♥
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As usual, Naomi manages to be perfectly hilarious while being perfectly obtuse: I especially like "it’s only Sophia, I haven’t unleashed napalm".
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Look, I've finally posted the last part!
Cook is my favourite person to write about. Cook from Naomi's pov doubly so.
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But my heart is breaking for Katie, poor little thing :(
And I never imagined I would have liked Sophia/napalm LOL
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Naomi gets things sorted in the last chapter, don't worry.
Thanks bb.
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