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Fic: Capture the Flag 20/24

May 15, 2010 01:04

Title: Capture the Flag
Author: triquetralmoon
Rating: R
Genre: H/C (respiratory illness, PTSD)
Warnings: Swearing, violence, flashbacks of graphic torture

Spoilers: Season 4, this is set in between Criss Angel Is a Douchebag and Sex and Violence.

Summary: A soldier in the war to stop the apocalypse, Dean is running himself into the ground as he runs away ( Read more... )

capture the flag, fic, ptsd, respiratory illness, did i mention supernatural illness?

Comments 10

deangirl1 May 15 2010, 10:44:16 UTC

I am simpy devouring this! The ectoplasm in the spew? Just gross and inspired! Very cool twist. I am so sad that there are only a few chapters left... but I just know this is not going to go smoothly...

triquetralmoon May 15 2010, 12:25:16 UTC

There certainly is precedent in their lives for things not going smoothly! :D

On the continued topic of songs we associate with the boys and that make us all weepy - if I knew how to make videos, I'd make one for Ingrid Michaelson's Keep Breathing. Especially for where Dean is right now and what the boys have been through...makes me all sniffly.

Lyrics:
The storm is coming, but I don't mind.
People are dying, I close my blinds.
All that I know is I'm breathing now.

I want to change the world, instead I sleep.
I want to believe in more than you and me.

All that I know is that I'm breathing, all I can do is keep breathing, all we can do is keep breathing now.

snowphilosophy May 15 2010, 12:23:21 UTC

Loving this! The brotherly banter/concern is great and sick!dean is never wrong. :)

triquetralmoon May 15 2010, 12:36:57 UTC

Thank you! Thrilled to be keeping your interest! :)

embroiderama May 15 2010, 12:49:19 UTC

Ectoplasm in the mucus---gross! But awesome. I'm nervous to see how this resolves.

triquetralmoon May 15 2010, 13:23:18 UTC

"Gross, but awesome!" is probably one of my favorite reviews ever! :D

hoodietime May 15 2010, 13:25:31 UTC

Ahhh, I get so excited when I see this has been updated. ;D

I can feel Sam's desperation at the end of this chapter; great job!

triquetralmoon May 15 2010, 13:47:38 UTC

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borgmama1of5 May 15 2010, 15:29:28 UTC

Great job of portraying the boys' heads where they were in yr 4.

Unfortunately after 'Swan Song' this is just so, so hard...

Loved the foreshadowing in the previous chapter about Bobby in a wheelchair. That hurt.

triquetralmoon May 15 2010, 19:25:16 UTC

Regarding seeing their S4 relationship after you've watched "Swan Song": Yes. I just want to say..."Get it together, boys! You're wasting valuable time with each other!"