Fic: Capture the Flag 24/24 + Epilogue

[triquetralmoon]

Title: Capture the Flag
Author: triquetralmoon
Rating: R
Genre: H/C (respiratory illness, PTSD)
Warnings: Swearing, violence, flashbacks of graphic torture

Spoilers: Season 4, this is set in between Criss Angel Is a Douchebag and Sex and Violence.

Summary: A soldier in the war to stop the apocalypse, Dean is running himself into the ground as he runs away

Comments

[snowphilosophy]

Oh, great ending! I'm glad Dean got to be part of finishing off the ghost, he deserved it. I loved how you wrote Sam and Dean and how they look after each other. &hearts

[triquetralmoon]

Thank you! I'm really happy you dug the ending.

With Dean partcipating I felt like the ghost got more of a "put to rest" ending.

[purple_pauline]

liked this very much

[triquetralmoon]

Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it.

[greeneyes_fan]

This was so freaking awesome. I love the way the Season 4 brokenness is worked in there, the PTSD, the casefic, Legionnaire's disease, which is a fascination of mine and, of course, mountains of endless gorgeous Dean whump.

I like the insight into Sam's blood drinking, how he justifies it to himself, tries to deny his addiction.

I found it ironically appropriate given my own little medical adventure of the last couple of weeks, also lung related, thankfully MUCH less severe than Dean's (Why does Dean always get like the absolute worst of anything? Oh, right, fangirls are evil.) In short, I love you.

[triquetralmoon]

Thank you so much!

I'm happy you thought the various aspects worked together, including Sam's rationalizations.

I'm glad I provided a story that gave you an ironical chuckle! Really really hope you're feeling much better!
I'm sending my love you too! :D No more medical adventures - just Adventuresome Adventures - with ...magical kite flying and such.

(Yes, fangirls are evil!)

[greeneyes_fan]

Thanks, I'm doing ok now. Just... met several of the drugs Dean met, is all. The boring details are under lock on my LJ.

I really do like the kind of casefic where they deal with the ghost meaningfully rather than just burning bones. Like in the Pilot, or that haunted highway episode.

[jackien1968]

Great story. I had read the first 3 chapters and then dropped it until complete. Tonight I tried to save all the chapters to read some other time, but here I am at almost 4 in the morning 'cause I couldn't drag myself away. Did I mention it's a great story?

Thanks.

Jackie

[triquetralmoon]

Oh wow! Thank you so much!

That is a gigantic blush-inducing compliment! I feel like I should apologize to your poor sleep-deprived brain, though! Sorry, Brain!

[chaigrl2786]

So I stayed up until 2am finishing your story. I was sooo hooked that I couldn't shut down the computer. LOL. You really nailed the characterization on the boys. I loved every chapter. I hope you have some other story cooking up in your mind, because you are a fantastic writer. Thanks for sharing. Hope to be reading more from you soon. Until then, take care and Happy Writing!

[triquetralmoon]

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to hear you loved it (pretty ecstatic that you used the word "hooked"). ::big goofy smile::

I have a couple ideas I'd been tossing around my head that I'd like to get down, so hopefully I'll have something up sooner rather than later.