Fic: Ticked Off 2/2

Aug 02, 2010 14:07

Title: Ticked Off
Author: triquetralmoon
Genre: Gen, H/C
Rating: R - just to cover bases, but mild swearing at most
Characters: Dean, Sam, and a dog
Warnings: Vague allusions to season 5.
Word count: ~11,000 in total

Summary: Dean picks up an unwanted passenger - and we aren't talking about the dog.

Part One Here

Ticked Off - Part 2 )

fic, fever, tick-borne relapsing fever

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maypoles August 3 2010, 18:10:38 UTC
Feverish!Dean is a not-so-secret kink of mine too, and I found this to be DELICIOUS. Not to mention really well put-together. Your writing always flows so well. ;)

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triquetralmoon August 3 2010, 20:25:46 UTC

Glad I nailed the kink on the head! (Strange that I should delight in that.)

I had to hack at it in a few places to get it to a flow-y place, extraneous stuff about the hunts that made no difference to the story at all and weren't funny, so it wasn't like there was a point. I tell you - deleting that much, scary stuff. Thanks for letting me know I made the right decision. :)

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parisindy August 3 2010, 19:38:36 UTC
awww that was great!

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triquetralmoon August 3 2010, 20:28:53 UTC


Thank you! :D

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janissa11 August 4 2010, 02:11:00 UTC
Awesome. But the crowning glory is the Accidental Wedgie. "Hey, Dean. Remember that time when you got the tick bite and you were, like, swooning all over the place, and I went to help you inside and grabbed your pants and gave you, like the World's Biggest Wedgie ev --"

::thud::

"OW! The hell was that for?!" *fingers jaw*

"I just remembered I owed you that one. Thanks for reminding me."

LOVED!

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triquetralmoon August 4 2010, 07:42:29 UTC


HAHAHA! That is exactly how that conversation would go.

Thanks for the love!

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dawnintheforest August 4 2010, 05:11:43 UTC
Oh so good. Just the right mix of hunting, aches, fever, puking, brotherly behavior, cute dog moment, etc!

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triquetralmoon August 4 2010, 07:44:27 UTC


Awww! Thank you so much!

(If I squint really hard it looks like the boys in your icon are holding hands instead of running for their lives.)

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fifimom August 4 2010, 15:44:33 UTC
Very much enjoyed reading. Thanks for writing and sharing.

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triquetralmoon August 4 2010, 19:19:20 UTC


Thank so much for reading! I'm really happy you enjoyed it!

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